Hi there^^

2014-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I agree your opinion that you mentioned in your feedback yesterday. This way is looked like good a way. And I agree with your all suggestions that you mentioned in your feedback during a week.^^ I am sorry that I am following your suggestions completely. But, I am keeping effort, don't worry about that.^^ -Homework for today- In this life, what should we relinquish so we can truly be happy? Explain your answer. I think that i give up something in my life is despair and milksopism. And the worst thing in the both such is milksopism. Especially, I hate a guy who is milksopism because if a guy has a milksopism, he has a low chance that will be successful about any work. Anyway, I don't like them who have a milksopism. Even though they are any one...^^;; PS. Klein. I have a plan that i will travle with my friends.^^ But, Don't worry about that i must answer your call tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your notice, Kirk, and for your wonderful words. They may seem good but putting them to practice would make them even better. Keep on striving hard to reach your goals! Moving on to your quite intriguing answer below, despair may really haunt us and it can make us appear as a milksop. Would you agree or disagree with my opinion? Kirk, if you would hate milksops, how would you be able to help them? I want you to ponder on this and tell me what you have to say on our next meeting. Meanwhile, I want you to enjoy your time with your friends to the fullest. Bring home great stories! Create amazing memories! Stay safe! _Klein I agree your opinion that you mentioned in your feedback yesterday.>>I agree with your opinion in your feedback yesterday.This way is looked like good a way.>>This way looks good. >>This looks like a good way.And I agree with your all suggestions that you mentioned in your feedback during a week.^^>>And I agree with all your suggestions mentioned in your feedback for the week.I am sorry that I am following your suggestions completely.>>CorrectBut, I am keeping effort, don\'t worry about that.^^>>Correct OR >> But I am exerting effort for my studies, so don\'t worry about that.-Homework for today-In this life, what should we relinquish so we can truly be happy? Explain your answer.I think that i give up something in my life is despair and milksopism.>>I think that if I should give up some things in my life, those would be despair and milksopism.And the worst thing in the both such is milksopism.>>And the worse thing between the two is milksopism.Especially, I hate a guy who is milksopism because if a guy has a milksopism, he has a low chance that will be successful about any work.>>I especially hate a guy who has milksopism because if he does, he has a low chance of becoming successful in any work.Anyway, I don\'t like them who have a milksopism.>>Anyway, I don\'t like those who have milksopism. >>Anyway, I don\'t like a milksop.Even though they are any one...^^;;>>Correct PS.Klein. I have a plan that i will travle with my friends.^^>>Klein, I have a plan to travel with my friends. >>Klein, I plan to travel with my friends. But, Don\'t worry about that i must answer your call tomorrow. >>Correct OR >> But don\'t worry about that. I must answer your call tomorrow.

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