Hi there^^

2014-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

-Homewok for today- Do you keep up with the Jonesses? Why do you say so? Very long time ago, I did something for keeping up with the Joneses. (I think the Joneses is right. Isn't it?) Maybe, When I began swenty, I appeared to do these works. But now I don't do these things, because I have known that the best way is doing my best. Maybe, If I will do any effort about my dreams or visons in self conscious, I can get some skills but i can't be grown up my self.^^

강사 첨삭

Yes Kirk, you are so right! J-O-N-E-S-E-S is the right spelling for this word. I wonder why mine has many \"S\". Good eyes! I just got confused with \"SWENTY\". What do you mean by that? I know that you can explain it to me later. Please bear with me Kirk. Let us continue to enhance our skills! Hopefully, keeping up with the Joneses is not one of them. _Klein -Homewok for today- >>-Homework for Today-Do you keep up with the Jonesses? Why do you say so? >>Do you keep up with the Joneses? Why do you say so?Very long time ago, I did something for keeping up with the Joneses.>>Correct!(I think the Joneses is right. Isn\'t it?)>>Correct!Maybe, When I began swenty, I appeared to do these works.>>Maybe, when I began __, I appeared to do these work. But now I don\'t do these things, because I have known that the best way is doing my best.>>Correct!Maybe, If I will do any effort about my dreams or visons in self conscious, I can get some skills but i can\'t be grown up my self.^^ >>Maybe, if I will exert much effort to reach my dreams consciously, I can get some skills that can improve me.

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