Hi there^^

2014-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi Klein.^^ This day is a good day for you, isn't it?^^ I have a good resting time now. because last weekend i had Finished very many schedule in last weekend.;; On last Saturday, I and all choir members(missionaries) visited to hospitals for many patients who is old people. And all members sang very many songs...;; so, my voice was broken...;; (In fact, since last thursday i had sicking.) So, I suffered in my church.T,T Now, I am well.^^ Please, let you take care of yourbody.^^ Bye~ PS I agree your opinions. Maybe, if you can speak english very well, I could not have better English skills.^^ -Homework for today- What are things that hold you up? How do you prevent the occurrence of such circumstances? Maybe, To make me holding up is myself. In fact, nobody make me to hold up, just my idleness make me to hold up. A best way what i can break this situation is to bring one to myself.^^;;

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Kirk! Did you take a nap? Don\'t talk too much, OK? I still want to listen to your angelic voice tomorrow. You might have been so tired due to your services to the elderly patients but I know that you deem it worthwhile. How I hope I can do the same sing! Just never let your idleness hold you up ever again, Kirk! You need to get your acts together as often as possible. I will catch you again on the next board! _Klein Hi Klein.^^This day is a good day for you, isn\'t it?^^>>Correct!I have a good resting time now. because last weekend i had Finished very many schedule in last weekend.;;>>I have a good resting time now unlike last weekend, I had to finish all my scheduled tasks.On last Saturday, I and all choir members(missionaries) visited to hospitals for many patients who is old people.>>Last Saturday, all my choir members from missionaries and I visited hospitals for many patients who are old people. >>On Saturday, my choir members and I paid elderly patients in many hospitals a visit.And all members sang very many songs...;; so, my voice was broken...;; >>Correct(In fact, since last thursday i had sicking.)>>In fact, since last Thursday, I was ill/sick.So, I suffered in my church.T,T>>CorrectNow, I am well.^^>>Correct!Please, let you take care of yourbody.^^>>Please take care of your body.Bye~PSI agree your opinions.>>I agree with your opinions.Maybe, if you can speak english very well, I could not have better English skills.^^>>Correct [English]-Homework for today-What are things that hold you up?How do you prevent the occurrence of such circumstances?Maybe, To make me holding up is myself.>>Maybe, I can hold up myself.In fact, nobody make me to hold up, just my idleness make me to hold up.>>In fact, nobody hold me up, just my idleness.A best way what i can break this situation is to bring one to myself.^^;; >>The best way to break this situation is to bring me to my senses.

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