Hi there^^

2014-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ What are you doing something now.? I think you would be doing some interesting things.^^ Plesae! Make your life so fantastic.^^ Ok? -Homework for today- 'Hold your horses! You will get what you want when the time is ripe.' Do you agree or disagree with the statement above? Support your claim. Hm.... It is very hard to become this situation. Just! Even if it won't be made to want to me, I would get more important thing. It is getting good experience. Eventhough i won't get a result that i want, experience must be left in my head. This is best thing, isn't it?

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Thanks for completing my day once more Kirk! I truly want to make my life \"fantastic\"! Can you give me some tips on how I can do it? You must be doing something great at this hour. What could that be? Let us just experience what life has to offer, in line with what you mentioned below. What a nice perspective! Thank you for sharing what you have to say about this matter with me. May you continue to have a wonderful day Kirk. Stay safe and take good care of your golden voice! _Klein Hi there^^What are you doing something now.?>>What are you doing now? >>Are you doing something now?I think you would be doing some interesting things.^^>>Correct!Plesae! Make your life so fantastic.^^ Ok?>>Correct! [spelling check: please] -Homework for today-\'Hold your horses! You will get what you want when the time is ripe.\'Do you agree or disagree with the statement above?Support your claim.Hm.... It is very hard to become this situation.>>It is very hard to be in this situation.Just! Even if it won\'t be made to want to me, I would get more important thing.>>Even if I won\'t get what I want for myself, I would get more important things.It is getting good experience.>>It is like having a good experience.Eventhough i won\'t get a result that i want, experience must be left in my head.>>Even though I won\'t the result that I want, my experience must be left in my head.This is best thing, isn\'t it? >>Correct!!!

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