Hi there^^
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-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
1.I saw a Korean movie and the title is "THE FLU".
Have you seen it Kirk? ^.-
Yes! Of course. I saw it long time ago.
I remember it is very imaginative movie.
And I like the main characters of this movie.^^ Maybe, Main charaters are a man and awoman. Was't it? Each name is Jang Hyuck and Su-Ae.
2.In what occasions do you feel like you have the jitters? Why do you think so?
In fact, When I started a leson with my first vocal teacher, I could not go on the stage to have a good confidence myself.
Because, that time, my voice was not good.
Say in easy terms, my voice was being changed toward bad side.
Infact, after that time, I did not sing on the stage, if I did not have a special situations.
Of course, It is differnt now.^^
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Jang Hyuk has a very good sense of humor! This is solely my opinion.
When I first saw him on screen, I didn\'t think that he could attract my attention.
All I uttered after the movie was, \"Not bad!\"
What I really don\'t like is the misrepresentation in the movie. It\'s too much for me to handle.
The best Korean movie that I\'ve seen so far is Hearty Paws.
I think I\'ve mentioned this before. It definitely left a very good impression on me.
How about you; what\'s your favorite Korean movie? Please share it with me!
Moving on to the second part of your composition, you are a changed man now - a better singer, person, son, friend.
You know that I wish you all the best.
It\'s time to bounce again.
I will catch you again Kirk!
Thank you so much for sending in your compositions.
Keep on writing!
_Klein
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-1.I saw a Korean movie and the title is \"THE FLU\".Have you seen it Kirk? ^.-Yes! Of course. I saw it long time ago.>>Correct!I remember it is very imaginative movie.>>I remember it is a very imaginative movie.And I like the main characters of this movie.^^
>>Correct!
Maybe, Main charaters are a man and awoman.
>>Correct [spelling check: characters]
Was\'t it? Each name is Jang Hyuck and Su-Ae.>>Weren\'t they? The former is Jang Hyuck and the latter is Su-Ae.2.In what occasions do you feel like you have the jitters? Why do you think so?In fact, When I started a leson with my first vocal teacher, I could not go on the stage to have a good confidence myself.>>Correct
OR >> In fact, when I started my lesson with my first vocal teacher, I could not stay on the stage with confidence.Because, that time, my voice was not good.>>CorrectSay in easy terms, my voice was being changed toward bad side.>>In easy terms, my voice was changed towards the bad side.
>>Speaking in lay man\'s terms, my voice was changed badly.Infact, after that time, I did not sing on the stage, if I did not have a special situations.>>In fact, after that time, I did not sing on the stage if not for a special situation or occasion.Of course, It is differnt now.^^
>>Correct! [spelling check: different]
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