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2014-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- 1.I saw a Korean movie and the title is "THE FLU". Have you seen it Kirk? ^.- Yes! Of course. I saw it long time ago. I remember it is very imaginative movie. And I like the main characters of this movie.^^ Maybe, Main charaters are a man and awoman. Was't it? Each name is Jang Hyuck and Su-Ae. 2.In what occasions do you feel like you have the jitters? Why do you think so? In fact, When I started a leson with my first vocal teacher, I could not go on the stage to have a good confidence myself. Because, that time, my voice was not good. Say in easy terms, my voice was being changed toward bad side. Infact, after that time, I did not sing on the stage, if I did not have a special situations. Of course, It is differnt now.^^

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Jang Hyuk has a very good sense of humor! This is solely my opinion. When I first saw him on screen, I didn\'t think that he could attract my attention. All I uttered after the movie was, \"Not bad!\" What I really don\'t like is the misrepresentation in the movie. It\'s too much for me to handle. The best Korean movie that I\'ve seen so far is Hearty Paws. I think I\'ve mentioned this before. It definitely left a very good impression on me. How about you; what\'s your favorite Korean movie? Please share it with me! Moving on to the second part of your composition, you are a changed man now - a better singer, person, son, friend. You know that I wish you all the best. It\'s time to bounce again. I will catch you again Kirk! Thank you so much for sending in your compositions. Keep on writing! _Klein -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-1.I saw a Korean movie and the title is \"THE FLU\".Have you seen it Kirk? ^.-Yes! Of course. I saw it long time ago.>>Correct!I remember it is very imaginative movie.>>I remember it is a very imaginative movie.And I like the main characters of this movie.^^ >>Correct! Maybe, Main charaters are a man and awoman. >>Correct [spelling check: characters] Was\'t it? Each name is Jang Hyuck and Su-Ae.>>Weren\'t they? The former is Jang Hyuck and the latter is Su-Ae.2.In what occasions do you feel like you have the jitters? Why do you think so?In fact, When I started a leson with my first vocal teacher, I could not go on the stage to have a good confidence myself.>>Correct OR >> In fact, when I started my lesson with my first vocal teacher, I could not stay on the stage with confidence.Because, that time, my voice was not good.>>CorrectSay in easy terms, my voice was being changed toward bad side.>>In easy terms, my voice was changed towards the bad side. >>Speaking in lay man\'s terms, my voice was changed badly.Infact, after that time, I did not sing on the stage, if I did not have a special situations.>>In fact, after that time, I did not sing on the stage if not for a special situation or occasion.Of course, It is differnt now.^^ >>Correct! [spelling check: different]

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