Hi there^^

2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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-Homework for today- Write down pieces of advice that you can give to a friend who is in(into) the red. Hm..... I don't have any idea... If my friend make this situation, I say to the friend just "work hard and repay the money." In fact, he doesn't need good advices because he know the fact that he must not take out aloan. If he take out a loan again, I will shout to him "stop this!" then.

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You said it perfectly! The emotion was conveyed to me. What you mentioned here can be true in many ways Kirk. Nice one! That\'s how it works these days. Well, I won\'t say goodbye just yet. I still need to go over the other ones. I though I can keep up with your pace. I\'m pretty slow. _Klein -Homework for today-Write down pieces of advice that you can give to a friend who is in(into) the red.>>Write down pieces of advice that you can give to a friend who is in the red.Hm..... I don\'t have any idea...>>CorrectIf my friend make this situation, I say to the friend just \"work hard and repay the money.\">>If my friend is in this situation, I will tell my friend to just work hard and repay the money.In fact, he doesn\'t need good advices because he know the fact that he must not take out aloan.>>In fact, he doesn\'t need a good advice because he knows the fact that he must not take out a loan.If he take out a loan again, I will shout to him \"stop this!\" then. >>If he would take out a loan again, I will shout at him, \"Stop this!\"

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