Hi there^^

2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- What will make you feel like you are in seventh heaven today? Once again, A thing that make me to be happy and to make me laugh and to enjoy me is just a girl friend.T,T HAhaha....;; And next, things that make me happy are food and exercise.^^ Maybe, If there are not those, my life is not funny and interested

강사 첨삭

I think you are forgetting something here Kirk. What about your family, very good friends and mastering English? You totally forgot about us! But of course, since I want you to be happy, I hope that you will soon get what your heart yearns for that you undeniably deserve. Is it time for me to bid you goodbye for today, Kirk? But before I do that, I have to thank you for showering me many blessings - your compositions and utmost participation during our classes]! How I hope that you learned many things from me. If not many, uhm, we can make it \"a few\". Thank you so much for today! Time to bounce! _Klein -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-What will make you feel like you are in seventh heaven today?Once again, A thing that make me to be happy and to make me laugh and to enjoy me is just a girl friend.T,T>>Once again, my girl friend is the first one who can make me happy, laugh and enjoy my life.HAhaha....;;And next, things that make me happy are food and exercise.^^>>And the other things that can make me happy are food and exercise.Maybe, If there are not those, my life is not funny and interested >>Maybe, if they are nonexistent, my life won\'t be funny and interesting.

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