Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
What will make you feel like you are in seventh heaven today?
Once again, A thing that make me to be happy and to make me laugh and to enjoy me is just a girl friend.T,T
HAhaha....;;
And next, things that make me happy are food and exercise.^^
Maybe, If there are not those, my life is not funny and interested
강사 첨삭
I think you are forgetting something here Kirk.
What about your family, very good friends and mastering English?
You totally forgot about us!
But of course, since I want you to be happy, I hope that you will soon get what your heart yearns for that you undeniably deserve.
Is it time for me to bid you goodbye for today, Kirk?
But before I do that, I have to thank you for showering me many blessings - your compositions and utmost participation during our classes]!
How I hope that you learned many things from me.
If not many, uhm, we can make it \"a few\".
Thank you so much for today!
Time to bounce!
_Klein
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-What will make you feel like you are in seventh heaven today?Once again, A thing that make me to be happy and to make me laugh and to enjoy me is just a girl friend.T,T>>Once again, my girl friend is the first one who can make me happy, laugh and enjoy my life.HAhaha....;;And next, things that make me happy are food and exercise.^^>>And the other things that can make me happy are food and exercise.Maybe, If there are not those, my life is not funny and interested
>>Maybe, if they are nonexistent, my life won\'t be funny and interesting.
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