Hi there^^

2014-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi Klein.^^ How is your a day today? I feel just so so in this day. Infact, my friend nick will go back to America tomorrow. So, I have time to eat dinner with Nick and other friends. Maybe, If will wake up early morning tomorrow, I would go to a airport. If I will make this situation, we may have the class time outside.; So sorry, but even if the situation will be made like above that, I must prepare for our class.^^ Good night Klein.^^ -homework for today- What can you say about holding a grudge? Cite your own experiences to support your answer. I think about holding a grudge is easy, if someone have a idea that it isn't hard. All situations are made by theirself who is in the situaions. So, these situaions can be changed by the theirself. For example, I had hated my father, It isn't now. Because, I am changed my mine now. And in fact, it is not hardwork.

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Hello Kirk! A very good 1st day of August to both of us! Please don\'t feel down. Nicholas may be going back to America but it doesn\'t mean that he will be gone forever. He will be back very soon and you can spend some more time together Besides, you can always give him a call to check on him and share many stories. Hopefully you are already awake at this hour. Send my best regards to Nicholas!!! Thank you very much Kirk! And another bunch of thanks for not holding a grudge against your father. You are so forgiving! Love all the people around you even those who can\'t quite understand you Kirk. Always take good care of yourself and stay \"HHH\" - Happy, Healthy, and Handsome! _Klein Hi Klein.^^ >>CorrectHow is your a day today?>>How is your day today? >>How is your day? I feel just so so in this day. >>I just feel fine but not completely this day. >>I only feel slightly fine today.Infact, my friend nick will go back to America tomorrow. >>Correct [two words: in fact; capitalization: Nick] So, I have time to eat dinner with Nick and other friends. >>Correct OR >> So we had dinner along with all our other friends.Maybe, If will wake up early morning tomorrow, I would go to a airport. >>Maybe, if I will wake up early tomorrow morning, I would to the airport.If I will make this situation, we may have the class time outside.; >>If this is the case, we may have the class outside. >>If this is the case, I would be out during our class time.So sorry, but even if the situation will be made like above that, I must prepare for our class.^^ >>I\'m so sorry. But even if this will happen, I must prepare for our class.Good night Klein.^^>>Correct! -homework for today-What can you say about holding a grudge? Cite your own experiences to support your answer.I think about holding a grudge is easy, if someone have a idea that it isn\'t hard. >>I think holding a grudge is easy if someone has an idea that it isn\'t hard. >>I think holding a grudge is easy if someone presumes that it isn\'t hard.All situations are made by theirself who is in the situaions. >>All situations are made by those who are in them, themselves.So, these situaions can be changed by the theirself. >>So these situations can be changes by themselves.For example, I had hated my father, It isn\'t now. >>For example, I hated my father until now. >>For example, I once hated my father.Because, I am changed my mine now. >>I have changed. >>I am a changed man.And in fact, it is not hardwork. >>And in fact, it was not hard.

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