Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Truthfully speaking, the weather is gloomy. It\'s been raining since yesterday.
The good thing here is that it is so cool! And I like it very much.
How\'s your day in the library?
Grab a good book this weekend and share what you will learn from it with me next week.
Make a promise and make it happen.
But let us not allow ourselves to get used to talking hogwash.
It can be funny once in a while but others may find it annoying, so let\'s be sensitive and considerate.
Kirk, enjoy your weekend!
_Klein
How is whether of your country today?
>>How is the weather in your country today?
In Korea is very hot.;;
>>In Korea, it is very hot.
So. I will go to a library for English study.
>>So I will go to a library to study English.
And, Thanks for your advice on the board.
>>Correct!
I agree it that my effort is not enough.
>>I agree that my effort is not enough.
I agree it... I know that the promise is easy but doing that is harder.
>>I agree with it. I know that making a promise is easy but fulfilling it can be hard.
I will have more effort for study and that I must try.
>>I will have much effort for studying and that I must try.
>>I will have more efforts for my studies and that I must try.
Thank you for your advice and sharing.^^
Have a good day.^^
>>Correct
-Homw work for today-
>>Homework for today:
If I speak hogwash, what would you do?
If you speak to me a hogwash, I will welcome this talking.
>>If you speak hogwash, I will welcome it.
Because, I like a jok and hogwash talk.^^
>>Because I like jokes and hogwash talks.
Welcome~~!!
>>Correct
OR >> I always welcome it.
>>It is welcome!
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