Hi there^^

2014-08-01 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How is whether of your country today? In Korea is very hot.;; So. I will go to a library for English study. And, Thanks for your advice on the board. I agree it that my effort is not enough. I agree it... I know that the promise is easy but doing that is harder. I will have more effort for study and that I must try. Thank you for your advice and sharing.^^ Have a good day.^^ -Homw work for today- If I speak hogwash, what would you do? If you speak to me a hogwash, I will welcome this talking. Because, I like a jok and hogwash talk.^^ Welcome~~!!

강사 첨삭

Truthfully speaking, the weather is gloomy. It\'s been raining since yesterday.

The good thing here is that it is so cool! And I like it very much.

How\'s your day in the library?

Grab a good book this weekend and share what you will learn from it with me next week.

Make a promise and make it happen.

But let us not allow ourselves to get used to talking hogwash.

It can be funny once in a while but others may find it annoying, so let\'s be sensitive and considerate.

Kirk, enjoy your weekend!

_Klein

How is whether of your country today?

>>How is the weather in your country today?
In Korea is very hot.;;

>>In Korea, it is very hot.
So. I will go to a library for English study.

>>So I will go to a library to study English.
And, Thanks for your advice on the board.

>>Correct!
I agree it that my effort is not enough.

>>I agree that my effort is not enough.
I agree it... I know that the promise is easy but doing that is harder.

>>I agree with it. I know that making a promise is easy but fulfilling it can be hard.
I will have more effort for study and that I must try.

>>I will have much effort for studying and that I must try.

>>I will have more efforts for my studies and that I must try.
Thank you for your advice and sharing.^^

Have a good day.^^
>>Correct
-Homw work for today-

>>Homework for today:
If I speak hogwash, what would you do?
If you speak to me a hogwash, I will welcome this talking.

>>If you speak hogwash, I will welcome it.
Because, I like a jok and hogwash talk.^^

>>Because I like jokes and hogwash talks.
Welcome~~!!

>>Correct

OR >> I always welcome it.

>>It is welcome!

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