Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi^^
Wendnesday, I met my friend Mr. [Name] who is my old dear.^^
And I looked around a new car with him.
Because, He and me need each a new car.
He may use this car in his business, Mine may be used for ....^^;;
Anyway, Long time ago, i thought that the car don't need to me, if that isn't used the business.
But, My thinking have been changed that if I have the car, I can use time more useful.
So, I decide buying a car.^^
If I would get the car, I will tell you first.
Have anice day.^^
-Homework for today-
Maybe, If I have liven alife without regrets, I can make a day happily myself.
And, To make happy a day is made by ourselves.
So, I may catch on his(?) mind.
What is your mind and idea?
강사 첨삭
Thank you for relating your whereabouts Kirk!
You will have to keep me posted then every now and then.
What kind of car are you planning to buy? Choose wisely!
And of course Kirk, I agree with your opinion below. Many things depend on our mindset.
How I hope that you are feeling happy at this hour.
Alas, I am not going to call you tomorrow.
But no worries, I will catch you again next week.
Enjoy your Klein-free days!
_Klein
Hi^^Wendnesday, I met my friend Mr. [Name] who is my old dear.^^
>>On Wednesday, I met my friend Mr.Kim who is my old dear.And I looked around a new car with him.
>>And I looked around for a new car with him.Because, He and me need each a new car.
>>Because he and I need a new car.
>>Because both of us need a new car
>>Because we need a new car for each of us.He may use this car in his business, Mine may be used for ....^^;;
>>Correct
OR >> He may use his car for business, while I use mine for personal purposes.Anyway, Long time ago, i thought that the car don\'t need to me, if that isn\'t used the business.
>>Anyway, long time ago, I thought that I am not in need of a car that won\'t be used for business.But, My thinking have been changed that if I have the car, I can use time more useful.
>>But my thinking has been changed that if I have a car, I can use my time wisely.So, I decide buying a car.^^
>>So I decided to buy a car.If I would get the car, I will tell you first.
>>Correct!Have anice day.^^>>Correct [a nice]-Homework for today-Maybe, If I have liven alife without regrets, I can make a day happily myself.
>>Correct [a life]And, To make happy a day is made by ourselves.
>>And to make a day happy depends on us.
>>And we can make a day happy by ourselves.
>>And making a day happy depends on us.So, I may catch on his(?) mind.
>>CorrectWhat is your mind and idea?
>>What is your idea?
>>What is on your mind?
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