Hi there^^

2014-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there. Is this time good for you, Klein?^^ I finished writing my signature on the contract that for buying a new car. If I should get the car, I will show it to you .^^ (But, It is a very small car.^^;;) Anyway, have a good day anddo your best for your work.^^ Cheer up! -Homework for today- If I should have time to talk with my father, I will do this very long time. Everyday, I think that I need a real father who I can share my heart, even though I backbite my father everyday. Of course, I know that my father will not cahnge but I want the father. Nevertheless, Do I have thankfulness with my father everyday?^^ Who are people that you want to have heart to heart talk with? P,S : Even if, I find some new words everyday, I can not use these things...T,T But I will challenge doing these everyday never give up!! Thank you and have a nice day.^^

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It sure is a good time for us to talk, Kirk! Now that you have already signed the contract, there\'s no going back. I really want to see your car in person!!! I want to try it out! How small is it? But no worries, I think I can fit in it. I sure am having a great day Kirk and I think I am giving my best shot in my reports. Have a heart-to-heart talk with your father later. Have the courage Kirk! I bet he wants to have a piece of your mind as well. As for me, I always want to have a heart-to-heart talk with you. my other friends, and my family. I think I don\'t have many secrets. And Kirk, I will definitely help you in remembering your new-found words. Just don\'t backbite me, please! Are you having a great time so far? I bet you are! I will catch you then tomorrow Kirk! Stay safe! _Klein Hi there.Is this time good for you, Klein?^^ >>Correct!!!I finished writing my signature on the contract that for buying a new car. >>I finished writing my signature on the contract for buying a new car. >>I finished signing the contract for my new car.If I should get the car, I will show it to you .^^ >>Correct!!!!(But, It is a very small car.^^;;) >>Correct!Anyway, have a good day anddo your best for your work.^^ >>Correct! [and do]Cheer up!>>Correct!!!-Homework for today-If I should have time to talk with my father, I will do this very long time. >>If I should have time to talk with my father, I will do this for a very long time.Everyday, I think that I need a real father who I can share my heart, even though I backbite my father everyday. >>Everyday, I think that I need a real father whom I can share my heart with, even though I backbite my father everyday.Of course, I know that my father will not cahnge but I want the father. >>Of course, I know that my father will not change but I want a different kind of father. >>Of course, I know that my father will not change but I want my ideal father.Nevertheless, Do I have thankfulness with my father everyday?^^ >>Nevertheless, do I feel thankful for my father everyday? >>Nevertheless, do I have to be thankful for my father everyday?Who are people that you want to have heart to heart talk with?>>Who are the people that you want to have a heart-to-heart talk with?P,S : Even if, I find some new words everyday, I can not use these things...T,T >>CorrectBut I will challenge doing these everyday never give up!! >>But I will challenge myself to do this everyday and I should never give up!Thank you and have a nice day.^^ >>Correct!

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