Hi there^^

2014-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi Klein. I am thankful for your advice. I agree it the Greek and Latin languages is related in English. July and August were derived Latin Language. I think that is funny.^^ -Homework for today- Have you ever gotten two strikes against someone? If yes, what happened? If not yet, what do you do o avoid it? Yes, I got a worst situation three years ago roughly. It is that I crushed a "Bent's My Bach". I don't konw if you're aware of that car, that is very expensive. Maybe, that price was $1,000,000. Fortunately, the Bent's did not be much broken. So, I did not be bankrupt...^^;;;; P,S I will show you pictures of my car tomorrow on internet.^^

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Studying languages is really cool, Kirk! [Not to mention mastering them.] But wait! What exactly happened Kirk? How come you almost destroyed that car??? I am not sure if it is \"My Bach\". I am only familiar with Maybach. Are they the same? Thank God it wasn\'t a huge damage! I bet it taught you a lesson to be even more careful than ever. And so Kirk, take good care of your brand new car! I will check the pictures of your can then online. Have a safe afternoon! Enjoy the ride!!! _Klein Hi Klein.I am thankful for your advice. >>CorrectI agree it the Greek and Latin languages is related in English. >>I agree that Greek and Latin languages are related with English.July and August were derived Latin Language. >>July and August were derived from Latin Language.I think that is funny.^^>>Correct-Homework for today-Have you ever gotten two strikes against someone?If yes, what happened?If not yet, what do you do o avoid it? >>If not yet, what do you do to avoid it?Yes, I got a worst situation three years ago roughly. >>Correct OR >> Yes, I got a worst situation roughly three years ago.It is that I crushed a \"Bent\'s My Bach\". >>CorrectI don\'t konw if you\'re aware of that car, that is very expensive. >>CorrectMaybe, that price was $1,000,000. >>Correct OR >> Maybe, its price was $1,000,000.Fortunately, the Bent\'s did not be much broken. >>Fortunately, the Bent\'s wasn\'t too broken.So, I did not be bankrupt...^^;;;;>>So I did not become bankrupt. >>So I was not bankrupt.P,SI will show you pictures of my car tomorrow on internet.^^ >>Correct!!!

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