Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you for your funny story that words is rooted.
You made me whom got new knowledges.
I think this is very funny that I got some new knowledges.^^
Can I request more things?^^
-Homework for today-
Do you have the heart to tell someone that you hate him or her?
If yes, what exactly are you going to do?
If you don't, how are you going to deal with this person?
In fact, I don't.
Even though, I may havethe heart to tell for people whom I hate, It may just my misstake.
Because, I know that a tongue make someone has scratchs.
So, I never say any words that is make someone scrach to any people.
What do you think about?^^
P.S
Klein~ my working schdule tomorrow is cancered.T,T
So, next our class will not be problem.^^
See you tomorrow.^^
And I am sanding a picture that is my a new car.^^
강사 첨삭
Good morning Kirk!
I\'m really happy knowing that you appreciate everything that I try to share with you.
Do you really want more? If yes, better check my upcoming feedback.
I have many in store for you! Better learn them by heart our dearest Kirk!
But please don\'t use your new-found words to hurt other people. Well, I know that you wouldn\'t because you don\'t have the heart to do so.
Then again, there sure are situations that call for the truth, though it may hurt others. That\'s just how it works.
We should then learn how to be brave enough to face this kind of challenge.
And since your work schedule was cancelled, you were able to talk to me a while ago Kirk.
Thank you so much for answering my call!
As for the picture that you sent, I will definitely check it out!
I will respond to your mail ASAP Kirk.
I will catch you then.
Stay safe!!!
_Klein
Thank you for your funny story that words is rooted.
>>Thank you for your funny story that words are rooted.You made me whom got new knowledges.
>>You made me get new knowledge.
>>You have given me new pieces of knowledge.
>>You have made me knowledgeable.I think this is very funny that I got some new knowledges.^^
>>I think it is very funny that I got some new bits of knowledge.Can I request more things?^^>>Correct
OR >> Can I request for more?-Homework for today-Do you have the heart to tell someone that you hate him or her?If yes, what exactly are you going to do?If you don\'t, how are you going to deal with this person?In fact, I don\'t.
>>CorrectEven though, I may havethe heart to tell for people whom I hate, It may just my misstake.
>>Even though I may have the heart to tell people that I hate them, it may just be my mistake.Because, I know that a tongue make someone has scratchs.
>>Because I know that one\'s tongue can make some scratches on others.So, I never say any words that is make someone scrach to any people.
>>So I never say any words that may hurt other people.What do you think about?^^>>What do you think about it?P.SKlein~ my working schdule tomorrow is cancered.T,T
>>Klein, my working schedule tomorrow is cancelled.So, next our class will not be problem.^^
>>So there will be no problem on our next class.See you tomorrow.^^>>Correct
And I am sanding a picture that is my a new car.^^
>>And I am sending a picture of my new car.
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