Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I glad to see you again after last friday.^^
How was your week end?
I had got many to do to use my a new car.^^
First doing is that i visit my grand mother and friend Mr. [Name] on last friday and saturday.
And yesterday I used the car to go to my church first time.^^
I feel that this car is been becoming mine increasingly.^^
-Homework for today-
What do you have up your sleeve Kirk?
My sleeve is strong health, Isn't it?^^
And another thing is passion of youthfulness.
I think that I will accomplish everything if I have both things above.
Maybe, Do you agree it?^^
And what is your sleeve?
P.S
Klein.
I may not have our class tomorrow.
Because, I got a new schedule that I will work from new company.^^
If I can get the phone, I will do that.^^
Have a good night.^^
From. Your dear.^^
강사 첨삭
You really are maximizing the use of your car, Kirk!
I want to try it out as well! But wait, I just might destroy it.
How\'s your grandmother? And of course, your good friend Mr. [Name], how is he? I think I gave him an English name. What was it again?
Just let me know if you remember it, OK? Thanks in advance!
And as for what you have up your sleeve, I think they are quite complex but feasible in many ways.
What I have up my sleeve on the one hand can be daunting. I\'m just playing around!
Mine would be something that I will still keep up my sleeve. You will definitely learn about it in time.
For now, we need to celebrate!!!
Congratulations, Kirk!
Do well at work!!!
_Klein
I glad to see you again after last friday.^^
>>I\'m glad to see you again after last Friday.How was your week end?
>>Correct [weekend]I had got many to do to use my a new car.^^
>>I got many to do using my new car.First doing is that i visit my grand mother and friend Mr. [Name] on last friday and saturday.
>>The first thing that I did was I visited my grandmother on Friday and my friend Mr. [Name] on Saturday.And yesterday I used the car to go to my church first time.^^
>>And yesterday, I used the car to go to my church for the first time.I feel that this car is been becoming mine increasingly.^^>>I feel that this car is becoming mine increasingly.-Homework for today-What do you have up your sleeve Kirk?My sleeve is strong health, Isn\'t it?^^>>What I have up my sleeve are for my good health.
And another thing is passion of youthfulness.
>>CorrectI think that I will accomplish everything if I have both things above.
>>CorrectMaybe, Do you agree it?^^
>>Maybe. Do you agree with it?And what is your sleeve?>>And what do you have up your sleeve?P.SKlein.I may not have our class tomorrow.>>Correct!
Because, I got a new schedule that I will work from new company.^^>>Because, I got a new work schedule at the new company.
If I can get the phone, I will do that.^^Have a good night.^^From. Your dear.^^
>>Correct!
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