Hi there^^

2014-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I glad to see you again after last friday.^^ How was your week end? I had got many to do to use my a new car.^^ First doing is that i visit my grand mother and friend Mr. [Name] on last friday and saturday. And yesterday I used the car to go to my church first time.^^ I feel that this car is been becoming mine increasingly.^^ -Homework for today- What do you have up your sleeve Kirk? My sleeve is strong health, Isn't it?^^ And another thing is passion of youthfulness. I think that I will accomplish everything if I have both things above. Maybe, Do you agree it?^^ And what is your sleeve? P.S Klein. I may not have our class tomorrow. Because, I got a new schedule that I will work from new company.^^ If I can get the phone, I will do that.^^ Have a good night.^^ From. Your dear.^^

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You really are maximizing the use of your car, Kirk! I want to try it out as well! But wait, I just might destroy it. How\'s your grandmother? And of course, your good friend Mr. [Name], how is he? I think I gave him an English name. What was it again? Just let me know if you remember it, OK? Thanks in advance! And as for what you have up your sleeve, I think they are quite complex but feasible in many ways. What I have up my sleeve on the one hand can be daunting. I\'m just playing around! Mine would be something that I will still keep up my sleeve. You will definitely learn about it in time. For now, we need to celebrate!!! Congratulations, Kirk! Do well at work!!! _Klein I glad to see you again after last friday.^^ >>I\'m glad to see you again after last Friday.How was your week end? >>Correct [weekend]I had got many to do to use my a new car.^^ >>I got many to do using my new car.First doing is that i visit my grand mother and friend Mr. [Name] on last friday and saturday. >>The first thing that I did was I visited my grandmother on Friday and my friend Mr. [Name] on Saturday.And yesterday I used the car to go to my church first time.^^ >>And yesterday, I used the car to go to my church for the first time.I feel that this car is been becoming mine increasingly.^^>>I feel that this car is becoming mine increasingly.-Homework for today-What do you have up your sleeve Kirk?My sleeve is strong health, Isn\'t it?^^>>What I have up my sleeve are for my good health. And another thing is passion of youthfulness. >>CorrectI think that I will accomplish everything if I have both things above. >>CorrectMaybe, Do you agree it?^^ >>Maybe. Do you agree with it?And what is your sleeve?>>And what do you have up your sleeve?P.SKlein.I may not have our class tomorrow.>>Correct! Because, I got a new schedule that I will work from new company.^^>>Because, I got a new work schedule at the new company. If I can get the phone, I will do that.^^Have a good night.^^From. Your dear.^^ >>Correct!

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