Hi there^^

2014-08-27 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there.^^ Today was also good to me and you, Isn't it?^^ Today, I went to deliverly company to work. And, I ran aroud in Seoul and Inchon city.^^;; So, My weight decease fully 3Kg...^^;; But, I am ok, because I got money.^^;; Any way, I am thankful to you to give me different new words that is rooted.^^ But, I could not find "CLAUS", "CLOIS", "CLUD", in my dictionary. Maybe, If you can give these words meaning to me, would you please do that?^^ Have a good night.^^ from your dear. Mr, Kirk. -Homework for today- Do you have my number? If yes, what kind of person do you think I am? If not yet, what questions do you have to ask to get to know me better? Of course, I can not understand your character exactly. Nevertheless, I know you are very kind and cool.^^ In fact, I like the charater. So, I feel like that I more like you in friendship.^^ I think you are so nice.^^ And I want to know what do you think about me?^^

강사 첨삭

Another wonderful day Mr. [Name]! Indeed, both of us had a good Tuesday!!! I just can\'t believe that your weight is 3 kgs. less! Come on! What you did must be a total workout, and is quite effective! I should try it as well! You even got the chance to hop from one place to another with pay. How cool is that? And to feed your curiosity, CLAUS, CLOIS, and CLUD are just roots, so they aren\'t likely featured in your dictionary. When attached to other roots, they would mean \"shut\" or \"close\". Did I forget to mention it? Oh, I\'m sorry. Now you know my number! I can be forgetful, too. And Kirk, I believe I know many things about you as well. Trust me when I say that you are a very nice person. You are so easy to get along with! You can also be playful, like me. You will notice that in many of our conversations, we always laugh out loud because of our silliness. I truly love talking with you!!! I bet if I am going to meet you in person, I will never run out of stories to share with you. And by that time, your ears will hurt because there\'s no time limit. Since we aren\'t really that perfect, I know that you have an evil side. You can be judgmental! If I remember it right, you once told me that your previous girlfriend is ugly!!! But I still like you! Besides, it\'s just normal. There\'s an evil in me as well. I can be very selfish, so weird and just insensitive. Even though you can be stubborn at times, I promise you that I will never run out of patience. Be patient with me as well, please. I\'m being carried away again!!! I better stop myself from writing. Stay safe Kirk! _Klein Hi there.^^ >>Correct!Today was also good to me and you, Isn\'t it?^^ >>Today is also good to me and you, isn\'t it?Today, I went to deliverly company to work. >>Today, I went to a delivery company to work.And, I ran aroud in Seoul and Inchon city.^^;; >>And I ran within Seoul and in Inchon City.So, My weight decease fully 3Kg...^^;; >>So, I lost three kilograms from my weight. >>So, my weight exactly decreased/ was lessened by 3kg.But, I am ok, because I got money.^^;; >>CorrectAny way, I am thankful to you to give me different new words that is rooted.^^ >>Anyway, I am thankful to you for giving me different new words that are rooted.But, I could not find \"CLAUS\", \"CLOIS\", \"CLUD\", in my dictionary. >>CorrectMaybe, If you can give these words meaning to me, would you please do that?^^ >>Correct OR >> Maybe, if you can give these words\' meaning, would you please do that?Have a good night.^^ from your dear. Mr, Kirk.>>Correct! -Homework for today-Do you have my number?If yes, what kind of person do you think I am?If not yet, what questions do you have to ask to get to know me better?Of course, I can not understand your character exactly. Nevertheless, I know you are very kind and cool.^^>>Correct In fact, I like the charater.>>In fact, I like that character. So, I feel like that I more like you in friendship.^^ >>So, I feel like I like you more as a friend.I think you are so nice.^^ >>CorrectAnd I want to know what do you think about me?^^ >>Correct OR >> And I want to know what you think about me.

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