Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there.^^
It is so good day to be happy because a weather of Korea was sunny.
Of course, I pained during a day because of the weather.^^
When I finished the work, I was showered by my sweat.^^;;
Anyway, my a day was so good.^^
How was your day?^^
-Homework for today-
Do you think you have your head in the clouds? Why do you say so?
Sometimes, I Imagine to become a Super guy.
It is like to become almighty man, I have my head in the cloud.
Of course, It is a dream of all humana.
So I have the dream sometimes like any people.^^
It may be like to make "Real" from "If", Isn't it?^^
P,S
Klein, I have a bad news.
It is that I won't have our class tomorrow because of working schedule in tomorrow.
Somehow, I may get the tomorrow schedule earlier than today.
If I may have the time of our class, I will not cancel it.^^
Have a good night.^^
강사 첨삭
Hello, Kirk! How are you feeling now?
My Thursday went by swiftly, which is a good thing because I was not really feeling well then. But right now, I\'m perfectly fine.
We have a fine weather, too, so I guess every thing will work out well. Does this sound like my I have my head in the clouds?
Indeed, you may be right when you said that your dream can be other people\'s dream.
I think about that once in a while, too. Such a wishful thinking, right?
What\'s worse, we know that it certainly can\'t be done.
It is then better for us to think of feasible things, so we won\'t be all too disappointed in the end. This is just what I think about it.
And thanks for your note, I\'m never left behind.
I always am updated on your whereabouts, and I like it! Thank you Kirk!
Have a good Friday and a better weekend!
_Klein
Hi there.^^
>>Correct!It is so good day to be happy because a weather of Korea was sunny.
>>It is a very good day to be happy because the weather in Korea is sunny.Of course, I pained during a day because of the weather.^^
>>Of course, I suffered from pain during the day because of the weather.When I finished the work, I was showered by my sweat.^^;;
>>When I finished the work, I was showered with sweat.Anyway, my a day was so good.^^
>>Anyway, my day was so good.How was your day?^^>>Correct-Homework for today-Do you think you have your head in the clouds? Why do you say so?Sometimes, I Imagine to become a Super guy.
>>Correct
OR >> Sometimes, I imagine myself as a super guy.It is like to become almighty man, I have my head in the cloud.
>>It is like to become an almighty man, I have my head in the clouds.Of course, It is a dream of all humana.>>Correct [human]So I have the dream sometimes like any people.^^>>Correct
OR >> So I have this dream sometimes, like any other people.It may be like to make \"Real\" from \"If\", Isn\'t it?^^>>CorrectP,SKlein, I have a bad news.
>>Klein, I have bad news.It is that I won\'t have our class tomorrow because of working schedule in tomorrow.
>>It is that I won\'t have our class tomorrow because of my working schedule.Somehow, I may get the tomorrow schedule earlier than today.
>>Somehow, I may have an earlier schedule tomorrow than today.If I may have the time of our class, I will not cancel it.^^
>>Correct
OR >> If I may have time for our class, I will not cancel it.
Have a good night.^^
>>Correct!
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