Hi there.^^

2014-09-04 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I cheched your all feedback today. And, I found some funny stories.(about your friend and My thinking about your face....)^^ Of course, You don't look to be chubby. You are very cute.^^ And I can not have cheched your friend's picture.T,T If I will get this picture, I will write down about this.^^ Have a good night.^^ -Homework fortoday- If you teeter toward your goal, do you think you will make it? Provide an explanation to your answer. Yes! Of course, I will think that i can do this. Because, success that I to do is made by myself, in my opinion. Even if the goal doesn't go toward my thinking, It can be changed by my will. So, I can be afraid about these situations. The destiny is made by me.^^ P,S If I can not have our class tomorrow, you won't worry about that.^^ Bye~~

강사 첨삭

Greetings!!! How are you feeling now Kirk after long hours at work? Have a good rest this coming weekend! I will share more funny stories to cheer you up. It may sound like I would be disturbing you, if you don\'t mind. I really want to know who among our friends is a little fat. I think almost all - including us, or maybe just me, excluding you. Besides, you always work out to maintain your fit figure. Maybe I should also set it as one of my goals and never teeter toward it. Like you said, it sure is dependent on us. Thank you for sharing a piece of your mind with me again our dearest Kirk. Just stay safe at work! May you continue to have a great time! _Klein I cheched your all feedback today. >>I checked all your feedback today.And, I found some funny stories.(about your friend and My thinking about your face....)^^>>Correct Of course, You don\'t look to be chubby. >>Of course, you don\'t look chubby. >>Of course, you are not chubby.You are very cute.^^ >>CorrectAnd I can not have cheched your friend\'s picture.T,T >>And I couldn\'t check your friend\'s picture.If I will get this picture, I will write down about this.^^ >>Correct OR >> If I see this picture again, I will write about it.Have a good night.^^>>Correct!-Homework fortoday- >>Correct [for today-spacing]If you teeter toward your goal, do you think you will make it?Provide an explanation to your answer.Yes! Of course, I will think that i can do this.>>Correct!!! Because, success that I to do is made by myself, in my opinion.>>Because success is based on what I do by myself, in my opinion. >>Because in my opinion, my success depends on me. Even if the goal doesn\'t go toward my thinking, It can be changed by my will. So, I can be afraid about these situations. The destiny is made by me.^^>>Correct P,SIf I can not have our class tomorrow, you won\'t worry about that.^^ Bye~~ >>Correct

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