Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Long time no see.^^
How are you resently?
My weight has been grow up for last 5 day.T,T
So, I went to the Han river side each days for five days.
Yesterday, I have the time to run fully 10Kms.
So, My leg ache a little bit.
How do you have got your hollidays?
Is it nice?
I want you to have got nice days.^^//
Please share with me.^^
Have a good day.^^
-Homework for today-
How are you going to prove to a new-found friend that you have a good head on your shoulders?
Do you agree that I am smart and sensible?
Even if you will agree it, I can't agree it.
I am a just person who want to become to be smart person. But Not yet....
I just am going to do my best..^^;;
If you agree that I am smart and sensible guy, "thank you very much".^^
강사 첨삭
Indeed, when was the last time that I received a composition from you? I don\'t quite remember. Oh, no, my memory is becoming faint.
But you certainly have new compositions here, so I\'m glad. Thank you very much for finding some time for your homework Kirk.
You better keep up with your exercise, so you won\'t become plump.
I think I gained weight as well but not as much as you did. I just got tanned because I went swimming with my family. I\'m not sure if I may call it swimming because you do know that I don\'t know how to swim.
Nonetheless, that\'s not it! I also went out with my good friends, saw a movie and of course, ATE a lot.
Don\'t worry, next time, I will invite you! Besides, you also had a wonderful time with your family, so it\'s good that I did not disturb you.
I think you won\'t allow me to as well because you know your priorities. And yes, Kirk, you are a smart and sensible person even if you won\'t agree with me. Having thought of doing your best is even a smart move!
Just keep it up and go for the goal!
Of course, I am more than willing to help you the best way I can. Just say the word.
And I won\'t say goodbye yet. I will catch you on the next board.
_Klein
Long time no see.^^How are you resently?
>>Correct [spelling check: recently]My weight has been grow up for last 5 day.T,T
>>My weight has increased for the past five days.
>>I gained weighted for the past five days.So, I went to the Han river side each days for five days.
>>So, I went to Han Riverside each day for five days.Yesterday, I have the time to run fully 10Kms.
>>Yesterday, I had the time to run for exactly 10kms.
>>Yesterday, I had a complete 10-kilometer run.So, My leg ache a little bit.
>>So, my leg aches for a bit.
>>So, my legs ache for a bit.How do you have got your hollidays?
>>How were your holidays?
>>How was your holiday?
>>How did you spend your holidays?Is it nice?
>>Correct [present]
OR >> Was it nice?
>> Was it well-spent?I want you to have got nice days.^^//>>I want you to have nice days.
>>I want you to get nice days.
Please share with me.^^
>>Please share it with me.Have a good day.^^>>Correct!-Homework for today-How are you going to prove to a new-found friend that you have a good head on your shoulders?Do you agree that I am smart and sensible?>>CORRECT!!!
Even if you will agree it, I can\'t agree it.
>>Even if you will agree with it, I can\'t.I am a just person who want to become to be smart person. But Not yet....
>>I am just a person who wants to become smart, but not yet.I just am going to do my best..^^;;
>>CORRECT!
OR >> I am just going to do my BEST!If you agree that I am smart and sensible guy, \"thank you very much\".^^
>>If you agree that I am a smart and sensible guy, thank you very much.
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