Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there.^^
-Homework for today-
When you were punished by your parents for doing something undesirable, did you have it coming?
Relate your experience in as much detail as you can. ^.=
When I more youth now, I was punished with my parents.
So, I got eough punishments from my parents.
And, almost all Korean people who have same age to me have grown up to be beaten from their parents.T,T
How about culture of your country?
강사 첨삭
Hello Kirk!
How are you feeling at this hour?
You know what, I truly imagined you being punished by your parents when you were younger.
Honestly, I got too much spanking from my father as well during my younger years because I was a bit naughty.
The way Filipino parents discipline their children must be a bit the same with how Koreans do it. Maybe only for some; never all.
Good thing we are way older to get such punishment.
Besides, we really are trying our best to determine right from wrong and make sound decisions.
It\'s still tough but we are more knowledgeable now than in the past.
This is solely my opinion Kirk. You may say otherwise and I would be more than willing to hear you out.
Enjoy your day then and again, thank you so much for doing your homework.
Stay fit and fab!!!
_Klein
Hi there.^^>>Correct
-Homework for today-When you were punished by your parents for doing something undesirable, did you have it coming?Relate your experience in as much detail as you can. ^.=When I more youth now, I was punished with my parents.
>>When I was younger than now, I was punished by my parents.So, I got eough punishments from my parents.
>>CorrectAnd, almost all Korean people who have same age to me have grown up to be beaten from their parents.T,T
>>And almost all Korean people who have the same age as mine have grown up from the beating of their parents.How about culture of your country?
>>How about the culture in your country?
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