Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Klein who make disturbing me.;;
How is your efternoon now?
I read your all letters.^^(Of course,I have not read your monthly advices.^^)
And I am really grateful your lettles and your concerns.
I know your effort that is for me.
In fact, recentlly I seem to understand your almost all advice.
It is truth! (Of course, every time I need to prepare my dictionary.^^)
In fact, when we began our class, I could not understand your sentences and idoms.
But now, I understand many things such above.^^
It is become by your steady effort.(Or : It is made by your steady effort.)
Thank you.^^
I will do that I can do whenever.^^
Have a good day and weekend.^^
-Homework for today-
How could I make you have a fit? LOL ^.=
*What would make you have a fit?
In fact, during every our class, you make me have a fit.T,T
Because English language is not easy yet.*.*
So, every morning I wake up to get great worries.^^;;
Nevertheless, It make me to be funny.^^
How about you?^^
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
Greetings!
Thank you so much for allotting time for the completion of your composition today.
Your words have always been really sweet. And of course, what I admire most is your honesty!
You even see to it that you read all of my messages. A bunch of thanks!!! Please keep it up! Just don\'t forget to prepare your dictionary. I actually do the same because I can never be all-knowing. There are many English words that I am not quite familiar with, too. That\'s life - we get to learn each day. I\'m just so lucky because I get to learn them from you. You\'re such a blessing in disguise!
Even though you think that I make you have a fit, I believe that your skills are better than you think!
Such great worries must have challenged you to strive harder! YOU CAN DO IT!
I will just keep on cheering you on and lending you a hand if you would be in need of it.
Well, it\'s time for me to bounce.
Stay safe Kirk!
Enjoy your weekend and please do not forget to exercise. [I believe you won\'t.]
Until then!
You are always in my prayers,
_Klein
Hi Klein who make disturbing me.;;
>>Hi Klein, who always disturbs me.How is your efternoon now?
>>Correct [spelling check: afternoon]I read your all letters.^^
>>I read all your letters.
(Of course,I have not read your monthly advices.^^)
>>Of course, I have not read your monthly advice.And I am really grateful your lettles and your concerns.
>>And I am really grateful for your letters and your concern.I know your effort that is for me.
>>Correct!
OR >> I know your effort is for me.In fact, recentlly I seem to understand your almost all advice.
>>In fact, recently, I seem to understand almost all your advice.It is truth!
>>It is the truth!
>> It is true!
(Of course, every time I need to prepare my dictionary.^^)
>>CorrectIn fact, when we began our class, I could not understand your sentences and idoms.
>>Correct [spelling check: idioms]But now, I understand many things such above.^^
>>But now, I understand many things such as above.It is become by your steady effort.
>>It has become a reality through your steady effort.
(Or : It is made by your steady effort.)Thank you.^^
>>CorrectI will do that I can do whenever.^^
>>I will do what I can.
>> I will do that whenever I can.Have a good day and weekend.^^>>Correct!-Homework for today-How could I make you have a fit? LOL ^.=*What would make you have a fit?In fact, during every our class, you make me have a fit.T,T>>In fact, during our class, you make me have a fit.
Because English language is not easy yet.*.*
>>Correct
OR >> Because learning the English language is not yet easy.So, every morning I wake up to get great worries.^^;;
>>CorrectNevertheless, It make me to be funny.^^
>>Nevertheless, it is also fun.How about you?^^
>>Correct
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