Hi there^^

2014-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi Klein who make disturbing me.;; How is your efternoon now? I read your all letters.^^(Of course,I have not read your monthly advices.^^) And I am really grateful your lettles and your concerns. I know your effort that is for me. In fact, recentlly I seem to understand your almost all advice. It is truth! (Of course, every time I need to prepare my dictionary.^^) In fact, when we began our class, I could not understand your sentences and idoms. But now, I understand many things such above.^^ It is become by your steady effort.(Or : It is made by your steady effort.) Thank you.^^ I will do that I can do whenever.^^ Have a good day and weekend.^^ -Homework for today- How could I make you have a fit? LOL ^.= *What would make you have a fit? In fact, during every our class, you make me have a fit.T,T Because English language is not easy yet.*.* So, every morning I wake up to get great worries.^^;; Nevertheless, It make me to be funny.^^ How about you?^^

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name], Greetings! Thank you so much for allotting time for the completion of your composition today. Your words have always been really sweet. And of course, what I admire most is your honesty! You even see to it that you read all of my messages. A bunch of thanks!!! Please keep it up! Just don\'t forget to prepare your dictionary. I actually do the same because I can never be all-knowing. There are many English words that I am not quite familiar with, too. That\'s life - we get to learn each day. I\'m just so lucky because I get to learn them from you. You\'re such a blessing in disguise! Even though you think that I make you have a fit, I believe that your skills are better than you think! Such great worries must have challenged you to strive harder! YOU CAN DO IT! I will just keep on cheering you on and lending you a hand if you would be in need of it. Well, it\'s time for me to bounce. Stay safe Kirk! Enjoy your weekend and please do not forget to exercise. [I believe you won\'t.] Until then! You are always in my prayers, _Klein Hi Klein who make disturbing me.;; >>Hi Klein, who always disturbs me.How is your efternoon now? >>Correct [spelling check: afternoon]I read your all letters.^^ >>I read all your letters. (Of course,I have not read your monthly advices.^^) >>Of course, I have not read your monthly advice.And I am really grateful your lettles and your concerns. >>And I am really grateful for your letters and your concern.I know your effort that is for me. >>Correct! OR >> I know your effort is for me.In fact, recentlly I seem to understand your almost all advice. >>In fact, recently, I seem to understand almost all your advice.It is truth! >>It is the truth! >> It is true! (Of course, every time I need to prepare my dictionary.^^) >>CorrectIn fact, when we began our class, I could not understand your sentences and idoms. >>Correct [spelling check: idioms]But now, I understand many things such above.^^ >>But now, I understand many things such as above.It is become by your steady effort. >>It has become a reality through your steady effort. (Or : It is made by your steady effort.)Thank you.^^ >>CorrectI will do that I can do whenever.^^ >>I will do what I can. >> I will do that whenever I can.Have a good day and weekend.^^>>Correct!-Homework for today-How could I make you have a fit? LOL ^.=*What would make you have a fit?In fact, during every our class, you make me have a fit.T,T>>In fact, during our class, you make me have a fit. Because English language is not easy yet.*.* >>Correct OR >> Because learning the English language is not yet easy.So, every morning I wake up to get great worries.^^;; >>CorrectNevertheless, It make me to be funny.^^ >>Nevertheless, it is also fun.How about you?^^ >>Correct

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