Hi there.^^

2014-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

I am thankful your cheer.^^ And I agree your opinions. The vital principle of communication is very important. Infact, when we start our first class, I didn't send my thinking. But now, I can send my message to you, of course, it is not perfect in gramar. It is fruit by you and me.^^ I will do that have more effort.^^ -Homework for today- Disclose your hard feelings for something or someone, if you don't mind I can disclose all my hard feelings for someone. It is a person who play game with me and then I get the worst of him. Sometimes, when I play some games and then I get the worst I am angry with the person.^^;; Is looking it a child?^^

강사 첨삭

Greetings, Kirk! Thank you for letting me know of your thoughts once more. I really thought that you won\'t have time to write compositions, but I was wrong. Here are your compositions! Our constant efforts sure have given us some fruits, so let\'s keep it up my dear! And as for your answer to the homework, this kind of behavior sure is inevitable. It\'s just that I hope your anger don\'t get manifested in terrible ways. I ought to thank you for trusting me and so you disclosed this with not much of hesitation. And to answer your question, it doesn\'t seem childish to me. Perhaps, if it\'s too much, it can be but is just normal with a moderate amount of anger. Did I answer your question properly? I will just catch you then on the next board. _Klein I am thankful your cheer.^^ >>I am thankful for your cheer.And I agree your opinions. >>And I agree with your opinions.The vital principle of communication is very important. >>CorrectInfact, when we start our first class, I didn\'t send my thinking. >>In fact, when we started our first class, I didn\'t send my thinking.But now, I can send my message to you, of course, it is not perfect in gramar. >>CorrectIt is fruit by you and me.^^ >>It is the fruit of your hard work and mine. >>It is our fruit.I will do that have more effort.^^>>I will do that with more efforts.-Homework for today-Disclose your hard feelings for something or someone, if you don\'t mindI can disclose all my hard feelings for someone.>>Correct It is a person who play game with me and then I get the worst of him.>>It is a person who plays a game with me and then I get the worst of him. Sometimes, when I play some games and then I get the worst I am angry with the person.^^;;>>Correct Is looking it a child?^^ >>Is it like a child? >>Does it seem that I\'m acting like a child? >>Is it childish?

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