Hi there.^^

2014-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi Klein.^^ How about your yesterday. I visitied a little exercise room in a church that my TaeKwonDo's master work. So, I had time for exercise my performance with him. By the way, I was so hard to exercise this performance because I might have very long resting time.;; So now, My body is feeling that is broken...;; I think that the usually exercise and martial arts exercise are so different. But I am ok and I will go to that place again for the performance.^^;; Pray for me, I will not sick...^^ Thank you! have a nice day.^^ -Homework for today- What are you hard up for these days? Infact, I am not hard up now. Just... My greed is increased,^^;Hahaha~ Anyway, nobody don't hate that they have a lot of money, Isn't it? And How about you?

강사 첨삭

I sympathize for your condition right now Kirk. You know what, when I had TaeKwonDo classes way back in 2011, every after the session, I simply drop flat on bed. It was tough but quite enjoyable because I took it with some of my good friends. Good old memories! Next time, we can have a match. But I\'m afraid you might defeat me and you will feel so sorry for me. You\'re just too good and I am no match for you! So Kirk, keep up with your practice and do well in your performance soon! And since you are not hard up for anything these days, I\'m relieved. Just enjoy every single minute of your day, like what I always do. I went out with my friends again yesterday, so maybe you can do it too. Always take care Kirk and there\'s one more composition that I need to check. I\'ll catch you there! _Klein  P.S. Don\'t be too greedy my dear. Hi Klein.^^ >>CorrectHow about your yesterday. >>How about your day yesterday? >>How about your Wednesday?I visitied a little exercise room in a church that my TaeKwonDo\'s master work. >>I visited a little exercises room in a church where my TaeKwonDo\'s master works.So, I had time for exercise my performance with him.>>So, I had time to exercise for my performance with him. By the way, I was so hard to exercise this performance because I might have very long resting time.;;>>By the way, I have a hard time exercising this performance because I might have had a very long resting time. So now, My body is feeling that is broken...;;>>So now, I feel that my body has been broken. >>So now, I feel that my body is collapsing. >>So now, I feel that my body is breaking down. I think that the usually exercise and martial arts exercise are so different.But I am ok and I will go to that place again for the performance.^^;;>>Correct! Pray for me, I will not sick...^^>>Pray for me that I will not get sick. >>Pray that I won\'t get sick. Thank you! have a nice day.^^>>Correct! [capitalization: Have-Homework for today-What are you hard up for these days?Infact, I am not hard up now.>>Correct [IN FACT - two words] Just... My greed is increased,^^;Hahaha~>>It\'s just that my greed has increased. Anyway, nobody don\'t hate that they have a lot of money, Isn\'t it?>>Anyway, nobody hates it when someone has lot of money, isn\'t there? And How about you? >>Correct

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