Hi there.^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there.^^
Thank you very much for your other advice for roots.^^
And once more thank you for that you are my light.^^
have a nice day.^^
-Home work for today-
What do you usually harp on, though you know that you shouldn't? Why can't you help it?
Sometimes, I harp up little mistake that I must not do.
It is lazy behavior to become again and again.T,T
In fact, I like that I don't move in a day.
So, I deliberately move much more.^^;;
강사 첨삭
You\'re always welcome Kirk! My pleasure!!!
I just don\'t quite believe you for writing that I am your light. Maybe you are referring to a different person.
If it\'s true, then thank you Kirk! I will try to be the best \"light\" you can have. [Though I know that it may be impossible. I will just try. Besides, I am like your second mother, right?]
And as your light, I\'m asking you not to harp on your mistakes. I will be here to remind you of this my dear. Stay safe!!!
_Klein
P.S. Take a break once in a while so you won\'t easily get tired practicing for your performance.
Hi there.^^Thank you very much for your other advice for roots.^^
>>CorrectAnd once more thank you for that you are my light.^^
>>And once more, thank you for being my light.have a nice day.^^>>Correct [capitalization: Have]-Home work for today->>Correct [one word - homework]
What do you usually harp on, though you know that you shouldn\'t? Why can\'t you help it?Sometimes, I harp up little mistake that I must not do.>>Sometimes, I harp on little mistakes that I make.
>>Sometimes, I harp on trivial mistakes that I commit.
It is lazy behavior to become again and again.T,T>>It is a lazy behavior, not doing anything about them and committing them again and again.
In fact, I like that I don\'t move in a day.>>In fact, I would want to be idle all day.
>>In fact, I wouldn\'t want to move all day.
So, I deliberately move much more.^^;;
>>Correct!
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