Hi there.^^

2014-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ I read your explaintion about MAL. And I just knew it when you talked to me. And I don't hope to get these situations that use these words.*.* -Homework for today- What is your image of a palatial home? Describe it in as much detail as you can. My house is very complexed by my father's accessory for audio and other somethings. The first, the riving room is so large in usually apartments. And the riving room is decorated many audio accessories. Of course, It is lesser than 2 years ago.^^ My father like these things and love to make udio system himself. And My room is decorated a bed and a desk and a chair and a piano and some bookcases.^^ Just in case, you may be able to think it is so simple, It isn't. Because, I don't have often the time that clean my room.^^;; But It is not too bad, looks like dirty.^^haha Anyway, My house is not small in usually APT.^^ What is your house, Klein?^^

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Yes, Kirk, let us refrain from using the root \"MAL\"! Let us just talk about your house! I would really want to pay you a visit to see everything for myself. I feel like your Dad is like my Mom because she does have very many decorations, too. Well, some of them are actually mine because I tried to collect dolphin figurines. I just stopped with the very last figurine that I got from my Dad as a gift. Our house, or should I say my mom\'s house isn\'t really grand. It is very simple and is good for a very small family like ours. What I\'m happy about it is we have back and front yards. My mom has a green thumb, so now you may imagine lots of plants surrounding our house. I will definitely invite you there if I get the chance to do so. But of course, I would want to have a house of my own someday. Oh well, Kirk, I still got loads of stories to share but I will save them for our next meeting. Until then! Time to bounce! Stay safe Kirk! _Klein Hi there^^I read your explaintion about MAL. And I just knew it when you talked to me. >>Correct [spelling check: explanation]And I don\'t hope to get these situations that use these words.*.*>>And I don\'t hope to get these situations where I can use these words.-Homework for today-What is your image of a palatial home? Describe it in as much detail as you can.My house is very complexed by my father\'s accessory for audio and other somethings. >>My house is very complex with my father\'s accessories for audio and other things.The first, the riving room is so large in usually apartments. >>The first part is the living room, which is so large as usual in apartments.And the riving room is decorated many audio accessories. >>And the living room is decorated with many audio accessories.Of course, It is lesser than 2 years ago.^^ >>CorrectMy father like these things and love to make udio system himself.>>My father likes these things and loves to make an audio system for himself.And My room is decorated a bed and a desk and a chair and a piano and some bookcases.^^ >>And my room only has a bed, a desk, a chair, a piano, and some bookcases.Just in case, you may be able to think it is so simple, It isn\'t. >>CorrectBecause, I don\'t have often the time that clean my room.^^;; >>Because, I don\'t have the time to clean my room very often.But It is not too bad, looks like dirty.^^haha >>But it is not too bad or is not too dirty. >>But it is not too messy.Anyway, My house is not small in usually APT.^^ >>Anyway, my house is not small unlike usual apartments.What is your house, Klein?^^ >>Correct

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