Hi there.^^

2014-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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What about your a day? I was worryied about your pain when I listened your new on your letter. Are your body and nose Ok? Take care your body My dear. And My waist is recovered now completely and absolutely. Thank you for your prayer.^^ And I will pray for you too. Please, take care yourself. -Homework for today- Do you and can you relish the things that have been handed to you on a silver platter? Provide clear-cut details that may support your answer. If I may hold this situation and chance, I will say "No thank you". Because, there aren't to be frees anywhere on the earth. For exemple, If I will won a lotto, It can't make me who have a ability making money. So, I don't buy any lotto. Of course, sometimes my friends gave me somethings.^^ Ne pain, No gain. What is your opinion?

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Oh, Kirk, you are really nice! Thank you for your concern. Honestly, my colds became worse than yesterday. Even my eyes and ears already hurt. Good thing it\'s your holiday tomorrow. I will make sure then that I will have a complete bed rest and I will eat plenty of fruits and vegetables. Of course, I need to drink plenty of water, too. Please do the same and don\'t strain yourself once more, so you won\'t feel any more body pains. Stay safe Kirk and yes, let us not get used to living with everything handed to us on a silver platter. Let us work our way to our success! Enjoy your long weekend my dear! I will catch you again next week in better condition. Until then! _Klein What about your a day? >>What about your day?I was worryied about your pain when I listened your new on your letter. >>I was worried about your sickness when I read your news in your letter.Are your body and nose Ok? >>CorrectTake care your body My dear. >>Take care of your body my dear.And My waist is recovered now completely and absolutely. >>And my waist has recovered completely now.Thank you for your prayer.^^ And I will pray for you too. >>CorrectPlease, take care yourself.>>Please take care of yourself.-Homework for today-Do you and can you relish the things that have been handed to you on a silver platter?Provide clear-cut details that may support your answer.If I may hold this situation and chance, I will say \"No thank you\". >>Correct!Because, there aren\'t to be frees anywhere on the earth. >>Because there is nothing free anywhere on earth.For exemple, If I will won a lotto, It can\'t make me who have a ability making money. >>For example, if I will win the lotto, it can\'t give me the ability to make money.So, I don\'t buy any lotto. >>Correct OR >> So I don\'t but lotto tickets.Of course, sometimes my friends gave me somethings.^^ >>Of course, sometimes, my friends give me some things.Ne pain, No gain. >>Correct [no]What is your opinion? >>Correct!

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