Hi there.^^

2014-10-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What is weather today in the Philippines? The weather of Korea is raining now. And a little cold and swet. The weather forecast said "after rain, the weatehr is going to cold. Whatever, I will take care myself like you.^^ Hey dear,Please take care your body yourself. Ok? And even though, you got the flu, your voice was sounded so nice.^^ Don't worry about that.^^ Have a great day.^^ From Kirk. -Homework for today- The chance that I was closed to God is when i start a choir "the name of Ensemble." In fact, I had gone to the church early childhood, the reason that I visit there was because of just funny. But, the choir. Ensemble changed me very differently. So, I remember that I had got almost all activities in the choir exactly. And since, started the choir, I had felt that I closed God. What about you?

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Greetings my dear Kirk!The weather here in the Philippines is fine. Christmas sure is in the air!Do stay on guard with the abrupt changes in temperature and season there. ^.-As for me, I feel so sick but it will be over pretty soon. My friend even asked me to go the hospital but I told him that it\'s just because of the seasonal flu. LOL Perhaps, he\'s just so worried because he I haven\'t been like this is many months.I have to thank you as well for your concern. A bunch of thanks Kirk!!! And thank you for your kind words here. I know that you are simply pulling my leg when you said that I still sound great with a stuffy nose. The problem is, even I barely understand my speech. LOLOh, what a pain in the neck! LOLBut thank God we\'re still breathing. ^.^I am so happy that at an early age, you already became so close to God. As for me, I was born a Roman Catholic and still am. I get no pressure form our church that\'s why I like it so much.I am always at peace knowing that though life is full of challenges, they were not made to exhaust us but to make us even stronger.Remember what I told you before that I do not think I am so in love with something that I can not seem to let go of?I think it\'s because of the fact that I own nothing on Earth. Everything is God\'s, even my life. He is just generous enough to make me borrow it for a while and experience many other things that He also created. It must be fate that I have found a very good friend in you Kirk!I just hope that I am also fulfilling my duty in helping you out to be better at speaking in English.Thank you for hearing me out once more Kirk and for sharing your thoughts here.Keep safe and God bless!Sincerely,_Klein^.^ What is weather today in the Philippines? >> What is the weather today in the Philippines?The weather of Korea is raining now. And a little cold and swet. >> The weather in Korea is a little bad. It is raining now and so is cold and wet. The weather forecast said \"after rain, the weatehr is going to cold. >> The weather forecast said, \"After the rain, the weather is going to be cold.\"Whatever, I will take care myself like you.^^ >> Whatever! I will take care of myself, like you.OR >> Whatever it may be, I will take care of myself, like you do.Hey dear,Please take care your body yourself. Ok?>> Hey dear, please take care of your body, yourself, OK?And even though, you got the flu, your voice was sounded so nice.^^>> And even though you got the flu, your voice sounded so nice. ^.=Don\'t worry about that.^^Have a great day.^^From Kirk. >>Correct! ^.^-Homework for today-The chance that I was closed to God is when i start a choir \"the name of Ensemble.\">>The chance that I got close to God was when I started to take part in the choir named \"Ensemble\".In fact, I had gone to the church early childhood, the reason that I visit there was because of just funny.>> In fact, I had gone to church in early childhood but the reason that I visited the place was it\'s fun. But, the choir. Ensemble changed me very differently. >>CorrectOR >> But the choir \"Ensemble\" changed me very differently.So, I remember that I had got almost all activities in the choir exactly. >>Correct!And since, started the choir, I had felt that I closed God.>>And since I started joining the choir, I felt closer to God. What about you? >>Correct!

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