Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Long time no see Klein.^^
The day is sended when we met last time whopping 4days.!!
And I appolozie to you, beacuse I did not send to you reply for your letter on face book.T,T
The reason that I cloudn't is that a problem was happened.
I don't kmow why this problem is happened, I couldn't recieve your message on friday.
(If I received your message, I could ask your body condition...^^)
So sorry...;;
Anyway, What is your body condition now? Is it good?
I want you who recover exactly.
Fighting!!(It is just Korean culture..^^;; Meaning is chear up!)
Happy night.^^
From Kirk.
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
ESSAY: What would you like to make hand over fist before this year ends? Expound your answer.
If I can do something that I want, It is just make a !!Girl Friend!!^^
In fact, these days I have been lonely...TT;;
Lonely night.
And another wish is rebuild my life to a new plan....
To exiting a new plan...^^Haha
강사 첨삭
No worries, Kirk!
You know that I just wish you the best. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. You really are a very good person.
As for new exciting plan, I know that you can make it. Make every second count!
Of course, I would be more than willing to hear you out at all times!!!
May you continue to have a wonderful day!
_Klein
Long time no see Klein.^^
>>CorrectThe day is sended when we met last time whopping 4days.!!
>>The day has ended once more and it has been four whopping days since we last met.And I appolozie to you, beacuse I did not send to you reply for your letter on face book.T,T
>>And I apologize to you because I did not send you a reply to your letter on Facebook.The reason that I cloudn\'t is that a problem was happened.
>>The reason that I couldn\'t is that a problem has happened or occurred.I don\'t kmow why this problem is happened, I couldn\'t recieve your message on friday.
>>I don\'t know why this problem has happened; I couldn\'t receive your message on Friday.(If I received your message, I could ask your body condition...^^)
>>If I had received your message, I could have asked your body condition.So sorry...;;Anyway, What is your body condition now? Is it good?
>>CorrectI want you who recover exactly.
>>I want you to recover completely.Fighting!!
>>Correct
(It is just Korean culture..^^;; Meaning is chear up!)
>>It is just a Korean expression, meaning \"Cheer up\".Happy night.^^From Kirk.>>Correct-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-ESSAY: What would you like to make hand over fist before this year ends? Expound your answer.If I can do something that I want, It is just make a !!Girl Friend!!^^>>If I can do something that I want, it is just to make a GIRLFRIEND.
In fact, these days I have been lonely...TT;;
Lonely night.>>Correct [lonely nights]
And another wish is rebuild my life to a new plan....
To exiting a new plan...^^Haha >>And another wish it to rebuild my life with a new plan-to an exciting new plan.
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