Hi there^^

2014-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Long time no see Klein.^^ The day is sended when we met last time whopping 4days.!! And I appolozie to you, beacuse I did not send to you reply for your letter on face book.T,T The reason that I cloudn't is that a problem was happened. I don't kmow why this problem is happened, I couldn't recieve your message on friday. (If I received your message, I could ask your body condition...^^) So sorry...;; Anyway, What is your body condition now? Is it good? I want you who recover exactly. Fighting!!(It is just Korean culture..^^;; Meaning is chear up!) Happy night.^^ From Kirk. -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY- ESSAY: What would you like to make hand over fist before this year ends? Expound your answer. If I can do something that I want, It is just make a !!Girl Friend!!^^ In fact, these days I have been lonely...TT;; Lonely night. And another wish is rebuild my life to a new plan.... To exiting a new plan...^^Haha

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No worries, Kirk! You know that I just wish you the best. Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. You really are a very good person. As for new exciting plan, I know that you can make it. Make every second count! Of course, I would be more than willing to hear you out at all times!!! May you continue to have a wonderful day! _Klein Long time no see Klein.^^ >>CorrectThe day is sended when we met last time whopping 4days.!! >>The day has ended once more and it has been four whopping days since we last met.And I appolozie to you, beacuse I did not send to you reply for your letter on face book.T,T >>And I apologize to you because I did not send you a reply to your letter on Facebook.The reason that I cloudn\'t is that a problem was happened. >>The reason that I couldn\'t is that a problem has happened or occurred.I don\'t kmow why this problem is happened, I couldn\'t recieve your message on friday. >>I don\'t know why this problem has happened; I couldn\'t receive your message on Friday.(If I received your message, I could ask your body condition...^^) >>If I had received your message, I could have asked your body condition.So sorry...;;Anyway, What is your body condition now? Is it good? >>CorrectI want you who recover exactly. >>I want you to recover completely.Fighting!! >>Correct (It is just Korean culture..^^;; Meaning is chear up!) >>It is just a Korean expression, meaning \"Cheer up\".Happy night.^^From Kirk.>>Correct-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-ESSAY: What would you like to make hand over fist before this year ends? Expound your answer.If I can do something that I want, It is just make a !!Girl Friend!!^^>>If I can do something that I want, it is just to make a GIRLFRIEND. In fact, these days I have been lonely...TT;; Lonely night.>>Correct [lonely nights] And another wish is rebuild my life to a new plan.... To exiting a new plan...^^Haha >>And another wish it to rebuild my life with a new plan-to an exciting new plan.

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