Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your a day?^^
I had a good resting time for my mind during a day over listening some musics that our choir sang in Japan.^^
So I got a peace of Jesus Christ.^^
If you want to listen these things, I will invite to my club of My choir on Face Book.
If you will check a "Good Thumb", you can listen these Anthems.^^
Of course, those things all are sang in Japanese.^^;;
If you want to know contents of those songs, I will write down it.^^
Take care your body My dear.^^
From Kirk^^
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-
My answer is absolutely "Yes".
It is so important to me because If my friend helped me that the project succeed, the half is thing whom my friend's.
Therefor, It is very important thing to me.
And I agree that all work in the world are not bacome by alone.
So, If I will succeed any works, It is contain not only my effort but also other people's effort.^^
And I will just say "Thank you very much all dear who help me. My dears! Let's divide all our results!!"^^
Is it enough?^^
강사 첨삭
What a nice day to stroll! Of course, Kirk, I want to be part of that group! I will truly listen to each song and let you know my thoughts. Thank you so much! Oh, wait, how about your TaeKwonDo performance? I just remembered! I want to see it, too.
Your career in singing will definitely go a long way with the other choir members! Congratulations for a job well done in Japan! And like you mentioned below, you share your success with your peers. That\'s a very good attitude of yours. Keep it up Kirk! Stay nice!!!
People will love you even more!!!
_Klein
What is your a day?^^
>>How is your day?I had a good resting time for my mind during a day over listening some musics that our choir sang in Japan.^^>>I had a good resting time for my mind during the day over listening some music/songs that our choir sang in Japan.
So I got a peace of Jesus Christ.^^>>So I got peace with Jesus Christ.
If you want to listen these things, I will invite to my club of My choir on Face Book.>>If you want to listen to these, I will invite you to the group of my choir on Facebook.
If you will check a \"Good Thumb\", you can listen these Anthems.^^>>If you will check \"Good Thumb\", you can listen to these anthems.
Of course, those things all are sang in Japanese.^^;;>>Correct
If you want to know contents of those songs, I will write down it.^^>>If you want to know the contents of those songs, I will write it down.
Take care your body My dear.^^
>>Take care of your body my dear.From Kirk^^>>Correct!-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY-My answer is absolutely \"Yes\".
>>CorrectIt is so important to me because If my friend helped me that the project succeed, the half is thing whom my friend\'s.>>It is so important to me because if my friend helped me and the project succeeded, half of it is my friend\'s.
Therefor, It is very important thing to me.>>Therefore, it is a very important thing to me.
And I agree that all work in the world are not bacome by alone.>>And I agree that all work in the world can not be done alone.
So, If I will succeed any works, It is contain not only my effort but also other people\'s effort.^^>>So, if I will succeed in any work, it contains not only my effort but also other people\'s effort/s.
And I will just say \"Thank you very much all dear who help me. My dears! Let\'s divide all our results!!\"^^>>And I will just say, \"Thank you very much to all my dear who help me. My dear, let\'s divide all our results!\"
Is it enough?^^
>>Correct
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