Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Oh, I am imagining your place right now. It\'s so serene!!! I want to pay you a visit there some time. It may take me long, so please wait.
Why don\'t you just come over here and I will be your pseudo-tour guide?
Our city is very smalls but there are many surprises, so it can be fun to stroll, provided that the weather is good.
My favorite spot would be _zzz_ oh my! I can\'t think of just one. I love many places! I will just take you there.
Let\'s have a tour!!!
_Klein
Hello, My friend.^^
I think that the special spot in my home town is no where...T,T
>>Correct!
Because, My hometown is just silent. Just silence....
>>Because my hometown is a quiet place.
So, It is not enough to feel danitiness.
>>Correct [spelling check: daintiness]
And My hometown is just made as square box...;;
>>And my hometown is just made as a square box.
So when I look at my home town from my house, I feel that iti is so boring...^^;;
>>Correct
OR >> So when I look at the surroundings from my window, I feel that it is so boring.
But If you and other forieners want to live auietly, I might recommand my hometown.
>>Correct [spelling check: foreigners; quietly; recommend]
Of course, It is not enough quiet.....^^
>>Of course, it is not quiet or peaceful enough.
By the way, What is landscape of your hometown?
>> By the way, what is the landscape of your hometown?
Please describe that.^^
>>Correct
And where is your favorite place in your hometown that introduce to me.
>>And where is your favorite place in your hometown that you can introduce to me?
P.S
My friend Klein.~!!
>>Correct
I want you who is recovered quickly.
>>I want you to recover quickly.
The reason of that I talk to you about this is becuase I listened your voice is so bad.
>>The reason that I am telling you this is that when I listened to your voice, it\'s so bad.
What is your body condition?
>>Correct
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