Hi there^^

2014-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Hello, My friend.^^ I think that the special spot in my home town is no where...T,T Because, My hometown is just silent. Just silence.... So, It is not enough to feel danitiness. And My hometown is just made as square box...;; So when I look at my home town from my house, I feel that iti is so boring...^^;; But If you and other forieners want to live auietly, I might recommand my hometown. Of course, It is not enough quiet.....^^ By the way, What is landscape of your hometown? Please describe that.^^ And where is your favorite place in your hometown that introduce to me. P.S My friend Klein.~!! I want you who is recovered quickly. The reason of that I talk to you about this is becuase I listened your voice is so bad. What is your body condition?

강사 첨삭

Oh, I am imagining your place right now. It\'s so serene!!! I want to pay you a visit there some time. It may take me long, so please wait.

Why don\'t you just come over here and I will be your pseudo-tour guide?

Our city is very smalls but there are many surprises, so it can be fun to stroll, provided that the weather is good.

My favorite spot would be _zzz_ oh my! I can\'t think of just one. I love many places! I will just take you there.

Let\'s have a tour!!!

_Klein

Hello, My friend.^^

I think that the special spot in my home town is no where...T,T
>>Correct!

Because, My hometown is just silent. Just silence....
>>Because my hometown is a quiet place.

So, It is not enough to feel danitiness.
>>Correct [spelling check: daintiness]

And My hometown is just made as square box...;;
>>And my hometown is just made as a square box.

So when I look at my home town from my house, I feel that iti is so boring...^^;;
>>Correct

OR >> So when I look at the surroundings from my window, I feel that it is so boring.

But If you and other forieners want to live auietly, I might recommand my hometown.
>>Correct [spelling check: foreigners; quietly; recommend]

Of course, It is not enough quiet.....^^
>>Of course, it is not quiet or peaceful enough.

By the way, What is landscape of your hometown?
>> By the way, what is the landscape of your hometown?

Please describe that.^^
>>Correct

And where is your favorite place in your hometown that introduce to me.

>>And where is your favorite place in your hometown that you can introduce to me?
P.S
My friend Klein.~!!

>>Correct
I want you who is recovered quickly.

>>I want you to recover quickly.
The reason of that I talk to you about this is becuase I listened your voice is so bad.

>>The reason that I am telling you this is that when I listened to your voice, it\'s so bad.
What is your body condition?

>>Correct

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