Hi there^^

2014-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Hollo My dear.^^ I want to you who get God Bless always. And You don't know how I am happy because we will meet again. Since last monday, I have worried about the situation that we can not have more time that we talk. And I tried to change the class time several times but my mannager said to me "You can not change the time." So, I have postponed our class to change our class by now. Maybe, Today's my tring would be last. Anyway, I am so glad to meet again with.^^ Now, I can not write more letter. because I am so tired and I will go to the working place early morning. I will share more something tomorrow.^^ Good night My dear.^^

강사 첨삭

Let\'s celebrate Kirk!!! I am truly grateful that you can still take your classes here at Power English with me. Our patience paid off! We can then share more stories every single day!!! Let us live our moments together to the fullest. I hope that we will learn more together. Stay safe Kirk and let\'s talk again later. May you continue to have a wonderful time! _Klein Hollo My dear.^^ >>Correct [hello]I want to you who get God Bless always. >>I want you to get God\'s blessings always.And You don\'t know how I am happy because we will meet again.>>And you don\'t know how happy I am because we will meet again. Since last monday, I have worried about the situation that we can not have more time that we talk. >>Since last Monday, I have worried about the situation that we can not have more time to talk.And I tried to change the class time several times but my mannager said to me \"You can not change the time.\" >>Correct [spelling check: manager]So, I have postponed our class to change our class by now. >>CorrectMaybe, Today\'s my tring would be last. >>Maybe today, my tiredness would be the last.Anyway, I am so glad to meet again with.^^ >>Anyway, I am so glad to meet you again.Now, I can not write more letter. because I am so tired and I will go to the working place early morning. >>Now, I can not write a longer letter because I am so tired and I will go to the working place early morning.I will share more something tomorrow.^^ >>I will share something more tomorrow.Good night My dear.^^ >>Correct!

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