Hi there^^

2014-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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HI there.^^ Did you have a good time today?^^ I did absolutely.^^ And I had sometime for exercising accent.^^ I will do these thing one more time our next class.^^ How do you feel about Korean women going under the knife for aesthetic purposes? i think that is not bad culture. Of course, all women must not be posoned to plastic surgery. But, If some women have any complex of their appearance, the surgery will help them that they overcome thier complex.^^ So, I think it proper that if someone need that, they can do.^^

강사 첨삭

A pleasant day to you Kirk! Brightening up our day sure can be easy with our vocalization. Keep it up! As for your answer to the question below, I just got a little confused with the word \"posoned\". What do you mean by this? I simply provided some statements, but I\'m not quite sure if I got your point right. I know that you will explain it to me clearly on our next meeting. Thank you very much! On the bright side, I understood the rest perfectly. Indeed, it has a lot to do with what you want. Just make sure that you are not deceived by others. As for me, natural beauty is still the best, coupled with inner beauty! Stay wonderful Kirk! _Klein HI there.^^Did you have a good time today?^^I did absolutely.^^And I had sometime for exercising accent.^^ >>Correct [some time]I will do these thing one more time our next class.^^>>I will do these things one more time on our next class.How do you feel about Korean women going under the knife for aesthetic purposes? i think that is not bad culture.>>Correct! Of course, all women must not be posoned to plastic surgery.>>Of course, all women must not be pushed to have plastic surgery. >>Of course, all women must not be lured to undergo plastic surgery. But, If some women have any complex of their appearance, the surgery will help them that they overcome thier complex.^^>>But if some women have any complex with their appearance, the surgery will help them overcome their inferiority complex. So, I think it proper that if someone need that, they can do.^^ >>So, I think it is proper that if someone needs that, s/he can do it/have it.

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