Hi there^^

2014-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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How are your this day?^^ From when I start my a new job to now, I have had busy days.T,T Maybe, the tasks will become harder than now. But fortunately, I have been skilled.^^ So, in the future, I may be able to be complete about my tasks.^^ Please, cheering my up!!^^ Good night.^^ -homework for today- What do you think are the advantages of going Dutch? I think that the going dutch is very good culture. Because, Many Korean women think that the buying something is only a man's responsibility when they have date. But, It is very evil thinking. I think the culture is just something that the Korean womem have. So, I like going Dutch!!^^

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kirk! I hope you can adjust to your new schedule. You can do it! You may unwind once in a while. Invite your coworkers and go Dutch. Actually, I love going Dutch, too! This way, I won\'t have to worry about causing too much trouble to my friends whenever I want to buy more. Let\'s go Dutch Kirk! May you continue to have a great time and stay safe. _Klein How are your this day?^^>>How are you this day? >>How is your day?From when I start my a new job to now, I have had busy days.T,T>>From when I started my new job to now, I have had busy days.Maybe, the tasks will become harder than now.>>CorrectBut fortunately, I have been skilled.^^ >>Correct So, in the future, I may be able to be complete about my tasks.^^>>So, in the future, I may be able to complete my tasks.Please, cheering my up!!^^>>Please, cheer me up!Good night.^^>>Correct-homework for today-What do you think are the advantages of going Dutch?I think that the going dutch is very good culture.>>I think going Dutch is a very good culture.Because, Many Korean women think that the buying something is only a man\'s responsibility when they have date.>>Because, many Korean women think that buying something is only a man\'s responsibility when they have a date.But, It is very evil thinking.>>But, it is an evil thinking.I think the culture is just something that the Korean womem have.>>I think this culture is just something that Korean women have.So, I like going Dutch!!^^ >>Correct

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