Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
How are your this day?^^
From when I start my a new job to now, I have had busy days.T,T
Maybe, the tasks will become harder than now.
But fortunately, I have been skilled.^^ So, in the future, I may be able to be complete about my tasks.^^
Please, cheering my up!!^^
Good night.^^
-homework for today-
What do you think are the advantages of going Dutch?
I think that the going dutch is very good culture.
Because, Many Korean women think that the buying something is only a man's responsibility when they have date.
But, It is very evil thinking.
I think the culture is just something that the Korean womem have.
So, I like going Dutch!!^^
강사 첨삭
Hello, Kirk!
I hope you can adjust to your new schedule. You can do it!
You may unwind once in a while. Invite your coworkers and go Dutch.
Actually, I love going Dutch, too!
This way, I won\'t have to worry about causing too much trouble to my friends whenever I want to buy more.
Let\'s go Dutch Kirk!
May you continue to have a great time and stay safe.
_Klein
How are your this day?^^>>How are you this day?
>>How is your day?From when I start my a new job to now, I have had busy days.T,T>>From when I started my new job to now, I have had busy days.Maybe, the tasks will become harder than now.>>CorrectBut fortunately, I have been skilled.^^
>>Correct
So, in the future, I may be able to be complete about my tasks.^^>>So, in the future, I may be able to complete my tasks.Please, cheering my up!!^^>>Please, cheer me up!Good night.^^>>Correct-homework for today-What do you think are the advantages of going Dutch?I think that the going dutch is very good culture.>>I think going Dutch is a very good culture.Because, Many Korean women think that the buying something is only a man\'s responsibility when they have date.>>Because, many Korean women think that buying something is only a man\'s responsibility when they have a date.But, It is very evil thinking.>>But, it is an evil thinking.I think the culture is just something that the Korean womem have.>>I think this culture is just something that Korean women have.So, I like going Dutch!!^^
>>Correct
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