Hi there^^

2014-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there.^^ Today's morning, like your order I hugged my moyher.^^ Thank you for your to give a hoot.^^ -Homework for today- What do you usually give a hoot for? Usually, I give a hoot the sight of other people. The reason that I give a hoot of the other people is that I am only son. Sometimes, I am felt much loneliness. So,I want many friend that I give my deep feeling. And The one person of those people is you.^,~

강사 첨삭

Thank you so much Kirk! Please don\'t feel lonely now. You are surrounded by people who love you so dearly. We all love you! This is true! We give a hoot for your whereabouts that\'s why we keep on checking on you. We want you to be safe and happy at all times. Stay warm my dear friend and may you continue to have a wonderful day! I miss you already!!! _Klein Hi there.^^ >>CorrectToday\'s morning, like your order I hugged my moyher.^^ >>Today\'s morning, like you ordered, I hugged my mother. >>This morning, like you ordered, I hugged my mother.Thank you for your to give a hoot.^^>>Thank you for giving a hoot!-Homework for today-What do you usually give a hoot for?Usually, I give a hoot the sight of other people. >>Usually, I give a hoot with the sight of other people.The reason that I give a hoot of the other people is that I am only son. >>The reason that I give a hoot of other people is I am an only son.Sometimes, I am felt much loneliness. >>Sometimes, I feel so much loneliness. >>Sometimes, I feel so lonely.So,I want many friend that I give my deep feeling. >>So, I want many friends whom I can give my deep feelings to.And The one person of those people is you.^,~ >>Correct OR >> And one of them is you.

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