Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi My dear.^^
Don't apologize to me.^^
Your my a good teacher and friend.
Just~ Today, Your call was arrived to me a little later than usual day.
And recently, I need to go to my working place earler than the past days that I went to there.
Because, these days are the and of the year(year-end).
I am sorry that I said to you strongly...
Anyway have a good resting time while sleeping time.^^
-Homework for today-
Do you have enough get up and go? Support your answer.
Yes of course~~!!
Especially, on those some pretty girls, I have to get up and go absolutely.^^
강사 첨삭
Greetings Kirk!
Are you having a wonderful time now?
Thank you so much for being so kind to me!
I will keep up with your hectic schedule from this day onwards. Just do not forget to take a break once in a while.
Never strain yourself. You already hurt your back and your waist. Don\'t wait for other parts of your body to be in so much pain.
And as for having enough get up and go when it comes to meeting women, I can\'t say much other than best of luck.
You will find your one and only partner soon my friend!
_Klein
Hi My dear.^^Don\'t apologize to me.^^
>>CorrectYour my a good teacher and friend.
>>You\'re my good teacher and friend.
>>You are my good teacher and friend.Just~ Today, Your call was arrived to me a little later than usual day.
>>It\'s just today, your call arrived a little later than any usual days.
>>It\'s just today, I received your call a little later than usual.And recently, I need to go to my working place earler than the past days that I went to there.
>>And recently, I need to go to my working place earlier than the past days.Because, these days are the and of the year(year-end).
>>Because, these days are the end of the year.
>>Because it is nearly the end of the year.I am sorry that I said to you strongly...>>I am sorry for saying it to you strongly.
>>I am sorry that I spoke to you strongly.Anyway have a good resting time while sleeping time.^^>>Anyway, have a good sleeping or resting time.-Homework for today-Do you have enough get up and go? Support your answer.Yes of course~~!!
>>CorrectEspecially, on those some pretty girls, I have to get up and go absolutely.^^
>>Especially on some of those pretty girls, I have to get up and go, absolutely.
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