Hi there :)

How was your weekend? It is time to wake up you after about 5 hours, early bird. Anyway, I'm writing my composition one day early. Here is my family introduction. There are four members in my family. My father,mother,older sister,myself. My dad is a business man. He works in wedding hall. He has a sense of humor. My mother is a manager in restaurant. She is a sophisticated woman and she likes to wear a beautiful dress. I feel like she is my friend. My sister is primary school teacher. She is a person with a pacific and respectful nature. Though we can't almost go traveling now because we are busy, we used to travel a lot of places when I was a kid. I think it is good to travel with my family. Venus, see you then. I will waiting for your call. Good night and sweet dreams.

Good morning Miss [이름]l!! My weekend was okay. I did not go to school because I was not feeling well. I felt lazy so I just stayed home and took a rest. You are right, I have to wake up again very early. I don뭪 want to be an early bird today, I want to sleep long^_^.  I am glad to have introduced your family. Nice family profile. I wish to met you and your famiy one day. I would be very happy and excited when that time comes. Anyway, I hope we wull have wonderful week!

Here are the corrections of your introduction. Review and rememeber:

 

How was your weekend? 

>> correct

>> or: How did you do on your weekend?
It is time to wake up you after about 5 hours, early bird.

>> In about 5 hours, you뭨e going to be an early bird because you will wake up early again.
Anyway, I'm writing my composition one day early.

>> Anyway, I write my composition one day earlier.
Hee is my family introduction.

>> Here is my family introduction:
There are four members in my family. My father,mother,older sister,myself.

>> There are four members in my family. My father,mother,older sister, and myself.
My dad is a business man. He works in wedding hall. He has a sense of humor.

>> correct

>> or: He is very humurous.               
My mother is a manager in restaurant. She is a sophisticated woman and she likes to wear a

beautiful dress. I feel like she is my friend.

>>correct

>> or: My mother is a sophisticated restaurant manager who loves wearing  beautiful dresses and whom I feel like a friend.
My sister is primary school teacher. She is a person with a pacific and respectful nature.

>> My sister is primary school teacher. She is a person with a peaceful and respectful nature.
Though we can't almost go traveling now because we are busy, we used to travel a lot of places

when I was a kid.

>> We used to go travelling when I was a kid but now we can뭪 because we are always busy.
I think it is good to travel with my family.

>>  correct

Venus, see you then. I will waiting for your call.

>> Venus, I뭠l see then. I뭢 going to wait for your call.
Good night and sweet dreams.

>> correct