hi there~

2011-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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good evening~ what r u doing now?? i just came back to my dorm. these day, i have a concerns about my body. the one is my hair. my hair was cut by unseen hairstylist. i satisfied with lengh but i don't like lengh of my bangs. it's too short. actually, i always like long hair. but i feel tired of my long hair. and i decide to cut my hair. my hair lenth near the shoulder. the best lenth of my hair is almost near the bottom. i think that maybe i had a obsession to my hair. :) have a nice night~

강사 첨삭

Hairstyles make women more glamorous. ;)  good evening~ >> Good Evening. what r u doing now?? >> What are you doing right now? i just came back to my dorm. >> I just came back to my dorm. these day, i have a concerns about my body. >> These days, I have a few concerns about my body. the one is my hair. >> First one, is about my hair. my hair was cut by unseen hairstylist.  >> My hair was cut by an unknown hairstylist. i satisfied with lengh but i don't like lengh of my bangs. it's too  >> I am satisfied with the length, but I don't like the length of my bangs. it's too short. >> It's too short. actually, i always like long hair. >> Actually, I always liked having long hair. but i feel tired of my long hair. >> But I feel tired of my hairstyle. and i decide to cut my hair. >> So I decided to cut my hair. my hair lenth near the shoulder. >> My hair is shoulder-length.  the best lenth of my hair is almost near the bottom. >> The longest length that I have grown my hair is almost near the bottom. i think that maybe i had a obsession to my hair. :) >> I think that maybe, I have an obsession about my hair. :)have a nice night~ >> Have a nice night.

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