hi there~
학생이 쓴 원문
good evening~
what r u doing now??
i just came back to my dorm.
these day, i have a concerns about my body.
the one is my hair.
my hair was cut by unseen hairstylist.
i satisfied with lengh but i don't like lengh of my bangs. it's too
short. actually, i always like long hair. but i feel tired of my long hair. and i decide to cut my hair. my hair lenth near the shoulder. the best lenth of my hair is almost near the bottom. i think that maybe i had a obsession to my hair.
:)
have a nice night~
강사 첨삭
Hairstyles make women more glamorous. ;)
good evening~
>> Good Evening.
what r u doing now??
>> What are you doing right now?
i just came back to my dorm.
>> I just came back to my dorm.
these day, i have a concerns about my body.
>> These days, I have a few concerns about my body.
the one is my hair.
>> First one, is about my hair.
my hair was cut by unseen hairstylist.
>> My hair was cut by an unknown hairstylist.
i satisfied with lengh but i don't like lengh of my bangs. it's too
>> I am satisfied with the length, but I don't like the length of my bangs.
it's too short.
>> It's too short.
actually, i always like long hair.
>> Actually, I always liked having long hair.
but i feel tired of my long hair.
>> But I feel tired of my hairstyle.
and i decide to cut my hair.
>> So I decided to cut my hair.
my hair lenth near the shoulder.
>> My hair is shoulder-length.
the best lenth of my hair is almost near the bottom.
>> The longest length that I have grown my hair is almost near the bottom.
i think that maybe i had a obsession to my hair. :)
>> I think that maybe, I have an obsession about my hair. :)have a nice night~
>> Have a nice night.
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