HI there^^

2015-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

Long time no see.^^ We have not saw in this web site until I get the accident. Honestly, I had missed your letters. So, I am happy that I write doen this letter now.^^ How about your each days?^^ I want to you have good mental and healthy body.^^ Please, Make your body and mind better than now. -Home work for today- How do you treat those people who you think are like fly-by-night? Fortunately, Nobody are people who is fly-by-night around me. Maybe, all the people around me are like you whom kindness.^^

강사 첨삭

It\'s nice to have you back on the board. I\'ve been dying to receive a composition from you Kirk!!! Thank you so much for making me smile today. You know how much I appreciate every composition of yours. I really want you to keep on writing. I can feel that you really are gradually recovering from the accident. Let\'s pray that your father and your mother feel the same. Thank you for your kind words here my friend! I will certainly follow your advice. Let\'s do it together - make our mind and body healthier than ever! Let\'s not be like those who simply fly-by-night. You have shared a piece of your mind once more. How do you feel about it? I hope you are enjoying it Kirk. Keep it up! I can\'t wait to catch you here once more!!! Until then! STAY SAFE AND SOUND!!! _Klein Long time no see.^^ >>CorrectWe have not saw in this web site until I get the accident. >>We have not seen each other on this web site since I got into the accident.Honestly, I had missed your letters. >>CorrectSo, I am happy that I write doen this letter now.^^ >>So, I am happy that I am writing down this letter now.How about your each days?^^>>How about each of your days? I want to you have good mental and healthy body.^^ Please, Make your body and mind better than now.>>Correct-Home work for today-How do you treat those people who you think are like fly-by-night?Fortunately, Nobody are people who is fly-by-night around me.>>Fortunately, nobody among the people around me is fly-by-night.Maybe, all the people around me are like you whom kindness.^^ >>Maybe, all the people around me are like you, who is kind.

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