HI there^^

2015-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there^^ Did you have a wonderful day? I want you to have a good day.^^ And I think that your questions of today is so interesting.^^~~ I think the first one that make me to fly the coop is a girl.... no many girl. Of course, now I am the guy who is orotund in front of all girls all of the world, but around ten years ago I was the guy who do not have good confidence from girls....;; I don't know reason of that....;;; Do you understand me???;;

강사 첨삭

I did have a wonderful Thursday Kirk. I even went home late because my friends invited me for dinner. Did you also stay out late? You know very well that I also hope that you always have a great day, even better each day. I just hope that I can also ask you out. Don\'t worry my friend because I won\'t be inviting many of my female friends. I don\'t want you to fly the coop! You better put your acts together my dear because you ought to meet many girls. I will keep on cheering you on! YOU CAN DO IT!!! Best of luck! _Klein P.S. This coming weekend, why don\'t you meet some ladies? Hi there^^Did you have a wonderful day?I want you to have a good day.^^>>Correct!And I think that your questions of today is so interesting.^^~~ >>And I think that your question today is so interesting. >>And I think your questions today are so interesting.I think the first one that make me to fly the coop is a girl.... no many girl.>>I think the first one that makes me fly the coop is a girl - NO! Many Girls.Of course, now I am the guy who is orotund in front of all girls all of the world, >>Of course, now I am the guy who is around many girls all around the world. but around ten years ago I was the guy who do not have good confidence from girls....;;>>But 10 years ago, I was the guy who do not have enough confidence when around girls.I don\'t know reason of that....;;;>>I don\'t know the reason for that.Do you understand me???;; >>Correct!

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