Hi there^^

2015-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there. I am glad to meet you again.^^ And I can not deny for your opinion.^^ I absolutely agree your opinion, Of course If I can controll properly my qualities. -Homework for today- Yes, of course I have had many plans that ended up being a flop. A failed plan among those things, I haven't gone studying abroad for the music. So, sometimes I feel to be sad myself. But I am ok now, because of new plan.^^ About the new plan, I will share with you tomorrow.^^ Good night.^^

강사 첨삭

It\'s really amazing how you can get to know someone so well though you haven\'t officially met in person, just like us! Honestly, I think I already know much about you. But of course, there are more to learn. Besides, you don\'t know me well. I\'m just lucky that despite this fact, you are still open to me. As for your plans that ended up being a flop, maybe God has something better in store for you. With your new plan, I will support you! Thank you so much for sharing this here. I will catch you again Kirk. I assigned another homework for you that I hope you would love to answer. Stay safe and regards to your parents! _Klein Hi there.I am glad to meet you again.^^>>CorrectAnd I can not deny for your opinion.^^ >>And I can not deny your opinion.I absolutely agree your opinion, Of course If I can controll properly my qualities.>>I absolutely agree with your opinion. Of course, I can control my qualities properly.-Homework for today-Yes, of course I have had many plans that ended up being a flop.>>CorrectA failed plan among those things, I haven\'t gone studying abroad for the music. >>One of my failed plans is I haven\'t gone abroad to study music.So, sometimes I feel to be sad myself. >>So sometimes, I feel sad for myself. >> So sometimes, I pity myself.But I am ok now, because of new plan.^^ >>But I am ok now because of a new plan. >>But I am fine now with my new plan.About the new plan, I will share with you tomorrow.^^ >>About the new plan, I will share it with you tomorrow.Good night.^^ >>Correct

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