Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, My dear.^^
How was your a day?
I want you to be blessed by our God.
And I was remind a thought that you are a good friend for me.
I am thankful that you give me many cheering up word while every moment.
I don't forget the words that you wrote down on the board.
-Homework for today-
Today, I have to make a new dream.
I can't talk about this because it is just mine.^^
But, the onething that I am sure is dreaming is a good thinking of flooing.
What is your dream my dear. I want you to have a dream for each days.
강사 첨삭
Greetings Kirk!
I ought to thank you once more for the flattering words that you have written here. Your words never fail to make me smile. Thank you!
All I can say is we somehow cheer for each other, which is a good thing. Let\'s continue to have many more dreams then and reach them slowly but surely. As for my dreams, one of them is to make you a better speaker of English. Of course, I can never do this without your effort. I\'m counting on you!
I will let you know my other dreams when the time is ripe.
Let\'s call it a day Kirk!
I will catch you again tomorrow. Stay safe and sound!
_Klein
Hello, My dear.^^
>>CorrectHow was your a day?>>How was your day?
>>How was your Tuesday?
I want you to be blessed by our God.>>Correct
And I was remind a thought that you are a good friend for me.>>And I was reminded of the thought that you are a good friend for me.
>>And I was reminded that you are a good friend to me.
>>And I was reminded that you are my good friend.I am thankful that you give me many cheering up word while every moment.>>I am thankful that you give me many words to cheer me up every moment.I don\'t forget the words that you wrote down on the board.>>Correct-Homework for today-Today, I have to make a new dream.I can\'t talk about this because it is just mine.^^
>>CorrectBut, the onething that I am sure is dreaming is a good thinking of flooing.>>But, the one thing that I am sure of is dreaming is a good thing for flooring [anyone].What is your dream my dear.
>>Correct [questions end with a question mark: ?]
I want you to have a dream for each days.
>>I want you to have a dream each day.
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