Hi there^^

2015-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, My dear.^^ How was your a day? I want you to be blessed by our God. And I was remind a thought that you are a good friend for me. I am thankful that you give me many cheering up word while every moment. I don't forget the words that you wrote down on the board. -Homework for today- Today, I have to make a new dream. I can't talk about this because it is just mine.^^ But, the onething that I am sure is dreaming is a good thinking of flooing. What is your dream my dear. I want you to have a dream for each days.

강사 첨삭

Greetings Kirk! I ought to thank you once more for the flattering words that you have written here. Your words never fail to make me smile. Thank you! All I can say is we somehow cheer for each other, which is a good thing. Let\'s continue to have many more dreams then and reach them slowly but surely. As for my dreams, one of them is to make you a better speaker of English. Of course, I can never do this without your effort. I\'m counting on you! I will let you know my other dreams when the time is ripe. Let\'s call it a day Kirk! I will catch you again tomorrow. Stay safe and sound! _Klein Hello, My dear.^^ >>CorrectHow was your a day?>>How was your day? >>How was your Tuesday? I want you to be blessed by our God.>>Correct And I was remind a thought that you are a good friend for me.>>And I was reminded of the thought that you are a good friend for me. >>And I was reminded that you are a good friend to me. >>And I was reminded that you are my good friend.I am thankful that you give me many cheering up word while every moment.>>I am thankful that you give me many words to cheer me up every moment.I don\'t forget the words that you wrote down on the board.>>Correct-Homework for today-Today, I have to make a new dream.I can\'t talk about this because it is just mine.^^ >>CorrectBut, the onething that I am sure is dreaming is a good thinking of flooing.>>But, the one thing that I am sure of is dreaming is a good thing for flooring [anyone].What is your dream my dear. >>Correct [questions end with a question mark: ?] I want you to have a dream for each days. >>I want you to have a dream each day.

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