Hi there^^
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Sometimes, the people who are energetic make some one be fliped their lib.
I think even if the people don't have any bad intentions, they make someones to be angry.
I don't know why that the problems are happened.//
But, These acts may make some situations unintended. So we have to be careful to talk with other people.
For exemple, When I am angry ,If someone ask me "Don't be agry!", I keep angry much more.
But, If Someone ask me "Why do you angry? Can I listen the reason of this?", I may calm.
What is your opinion for that?
Argue with my metion.^^
For reference, I would not experience like this situation.^^;;
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Hi, Kirk! It sure is inevitable for others to get irritated when bothered by overly animated people, especially in the context that you elaborated below.
Honestly, when I am angry, I also get angrier when someone bosses around and tells me what to do. It simply pisses me off. But of course, that\'s very seldom. Besides, I try to keep a cool head and be as animated as the people around me. I just hope that they are not quite annoyed.
Since you asked me to argue with your claim, I would say that this is a case-by-case basis. We do have different personalities and so, we have different ways of dealing with people and even ourselves. This may then be applicable to some but not to everyone. How does that sound? Now I want you to argue with my claim, too.
I am just curious, have I ever done or said something that made you flip your lid?
Please let me know of your answer when you\'re ready.
I\'ll be waiting patiently.
Thank you so much Kirk!
Let\'s enjoy our day and talk again very soon.
Until then!
Stay safe!
_Klein
Sometimes, the people who are energetic make some one be fliped their lib.
>>Sometimes, the people who are energetic make someone flip his/her lid.I think even if the people don\'t have any bad intentions, they make someones to be angry.
>>I think even if the people don\'t have any bad intentions, they can make someone angry.I don\'t know why that the problems are happened.//
>>I don\'t know why that problem happens.But, These acts may make some situations unintended. So we have to be careful to talk with other people.>>But these acts can be made unintendedly, so we have to be careful with how we talk with other people.
>>But these acts create such situations inadvertently, so we have to be careful with our words.For exemple, When I am angry ,If someone ask me \"Don\'t be agry!\", I keep angry much more.
>>For example, when I am angry and someone asks me not to be angry, I would get much angrier.
>>For example, when I am angry and someone tell me, \"Don\'t be angry!\" I would keep my anger and even be angrier.But, If Someone ask me \"Why do you angry? Can I listen the reason of this?\", I may calm.>>But if someone asks me why I am angry, and would listen to my reason, I may be calmed.
>>But if someone asks me, \"Why are you angry? Can you tell me the reason?\" I may be calmed.What is your opinion for that?>>What is your opinion to that?Argue with my metion.^^>>Argue with my statement or claim.For reference, I would not experience like this situation.^^;;
>>For reference, I have not experienced this kind of situation.
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