Hi there^^

2015-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

학생이 쓴 원문

It is not fault for our class to meet us early morning. But sometimes, It is very hard work to wake up early morning. Nevertheless, I know that is needed me. Because, I may be have better life style than when I don't do. I know.;;; So, I may find fault one more thing, the sound that is in our call is so soft... I will change my headset to better thing.;; Anyway, I am thankful that you have prayers for me.^^ God bless.^^

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kirk! Thank you so much for being so honest here. You truly pointed out the main things that somehow bother you, which are related with our class. I hope you can get used to waking up early again, just like in the past. YOU CAN DO IT Kirk! I won\'t get tired of cheering you on. As for the audio, will you buy a new headset? Would you like me to speak louder? I hope it won\'t be a burden to you. Let\'s do something about this, so we can have a better class. I can not wait to speak with you again. So long Kirk! Stay safe and God bless. Always praying for you, _Klein It is not fault for our class to meet us early morning. >>It is not a fault in our class to make us meet in early morning. >>It is not a fault in our class to meet early in the morning.But sometimes, It is very hard work to wake up early morning. >>Correct!Nevertheless, I know that is needed me. >>Nevertheless, I know that it is needed.Because, I may be have better life style than when I don\'t do. >>Because, I may have a better lifestyle than when I don\'t. I know.;;; >>Correct!So, I may find fault one more thing, the sound that is in our call is so soft... >>So, I may find one more fault that is the sound in our call, which is so soft. >>So, I may find one more fault that is the soft audio of our call.I will change my headset to better thing.;;>>I will change my headset for a better audio.Anyway, I am thankful that you have prayers for me.^^God bless.^^ >>Correct

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