Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
It is not fault for our class to meet us early morning.
But sometimes, It is very hard work to wake up early morning.
Nevertheless, I know that is needed me.
Because, I may be have better life style than when I don't do. I know.;;;
So, I may find fault one more thing, the sound that is in our call is so soft...
I will change my headset to better thing.;;
Anyway, I am thankful that you have prayers for me.^^
God bless.^^
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Hello, Kirk! Thank you so much for being so honest here.
You truly pointed out the main things that somehow bother you, which are related with our class.
I hope you can get used to waking up early again, just like in the past. YOU CAN DO IT Kirk! I won\'t get tired of cheering you on.
As for the audio, will you buy a new headset? Would you like me to speak louder?
I hope it won\'t be a burden to you.
Let\'s do something about this, so we can have a better class.
I can not wait to speak with you again.
So long Kirk!
Stay safe and God bless.
Always praying for you,
_Klein
It is not fault for our class to meet us early morning.
>>It is not a fault in our class to make us meet in early morning.
>>It is not a fault in our class to meet early in the morning.But sometimes, It is very hard work to wake up early morning.
>>Correct!Nevertheless, I know that is needed me.
>>Nevertheless, I know that it is needed.Because, I may be have better life style than when I don\'t do.
>>Because, I may have a better lifestyle than when I don\'t.
I know.;;;
>>Correct!So, I may find fault one more thing, the sound that is in our call is so soft...
>>So, I may find one more fault that is the sound in our call, which is so soft.
>>So, I may find one more fault that is the soft audio of our call.I will change my headset to better thing.;;>>I will change my headset for a better audio.Anyway, I am thankful that you have prayers for me.^^God bless.^^
>>Correct
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