Hi there^^

2015-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi My dear. How lived during Holydays? I hope you to have happy times during holydays.^^ And I agree your message that you metioned in feedback. A good environment is vital thing what we have good learning.^^ So, Sometimes I used to arrange my room for good learning. I think it is best way to have good studying time. -Homework- Relate any of your experiences where you had a fender bender. You know.... I have a accident in way to work lately. It is a experience that I don't want to experience any more. Do you have any experiences for accident recently?

강사 첨삭

Hi Kirk! Until now, I am missing you so badly! How have you been doing? I sure haven\'t heard from you in days. I spent my vacation with some of my friends and my family. How about you? I truly hope that you had a wonderful time with the ones you love. I also hope that you had time to tidy up your room. It will even be more conducive to learning. I know that you quite agree with me on this matter. Did you also study English during our vacation? I guess, it\'s one way to prohibit you from going out. The car accident must have left a deep scar in you. I honestly believe that no one would want that to happen again. But wait! I don\'t really mean to let you stay in your house for the rest of your life. In fact, I would love it if you will make many plans with your friends. Go out and have fun but stay out of trouble my friend! As for me, I always experience a fender bender but of lesser degree than what you just had. Perhaps, I am also prone to accidents. Oh brother! Just the thought of it gives me chills. The point here is for us to always look after ourselves and the ones around us if we can. STAY SAFE KIRK! I can not wait to catch you again in a while. _Klein Hi My dear. >>CorrectHow lived during Holydays? >>How did you live your holidays? >>How was your life during the holidays?I hope you to have happy times during holydays.^^>>I hope you had happy times during the holidays.And I agree your message that you metioned in feedback.>>And I agree with the message that you mentioned on the feedback.A good environment is vital thing what we have good learning.^^>>A good environment is a vital thing to have good learning. >>A good environment is vital for learning.So, Sometimes I used to arrange my room for good learning.>>CorrectI think it is best way to have good studying time.>>Correct OR >> I think it is the best way to have a good studying time.-Homework-Relate any of your experiences where you had a fender bender.You know.... I have a accident in way to work lately.>>You know I had an accident on my way to work lately.It is a experience that I don\'t want to experience any more.>>It is an experience that I don\'t want to experience anymore.Do you have any experiences for accident recently? >>Do you have any experiences of accident recently?

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