Hi there^^

2015-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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In last month, I have accomplished to connect with (or become intimate) church members in to play soccer game.^^ I think it is the best accomplishment in my living(or life) last month.^^ And brand new month, I will find new dreams for my life. I think I have lived my life that is no dreams. So, I want to find new dreams that make me to be excited. It is the thing that I want to accomplish in this month.^^ How about you?^^

강사 첨삭

It sure is a great accomplishment to be in better terms with your peers in church. I am so happy for you! I hope you will treasure them, like how you treasure your good old friend, Nicholas. Have you figured out your new dreams? If you do not mind, please share them with me. Whatever they are, I\'ll do my best to help you achieve them, if possible. Spice up your life then Kirk! Why not try something different? Does this sound exciting? As for me, one of the things that I would want to accomplish is to make you feel that you are somehow improving your English communication skills. I also want to boost your self-esteem, so you can view things lightly. Honestly, I got loads on my plate. I hope I can attend to each of them with equal passion. This would be it for this month. The rest will have to wait. I am not omnipotent, so I better take it one at a time. I would recommend you to do it, too. Do not pressure yourself. Take it easy! May you continue to have a wonderful time Kirk. Enjoy every second of it! _Klein In last month, I have accomplished to connect with (or become intimate) church membersin to play soccer game.^^>>Last month, I have accomplished connecting with or becoming intimate with my church members by playing soccer or through a soccer game.I think it is the best accomplishment in my living(or life) last month.^^>>I think it is the best accomplishment in my life last month.And brand new month, I will find new dreams for my life.>>And this brand new month, I will find new dreams for my life.I think I have lived my life that is no dreams.>>I think I have lived a life with no dreams. >>I think I have lived my life with no dream. >>I think I have lived a life, which has no dream. >>I think I have lived a life that has no dream.So, I want to find new dreams that make me to be excited.>>Correct OR >> So, I want to find new dreams that would make me excited.It is the thing that I want to accomplish in this month.^^>>Correct OR >> It is the thing that I want to accomplish this month.How about you?^^ >>Correct

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