Hi there^^

2015-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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MY dear... Honestly and honestly,,, I want to fall for someone..... But recently, there is no one that I want to fall for around me...T,T Do you have anyone that you want to fall for? If you have, don't hesitate to effort for close with him.^^ And finally.. I will try everything for better English speaker.!! cheer me up PLZ~~!!

강사 첨삭

You have opened up once more Kirk! Thank you. I guess you must focus on making yourself better first before looking for your better half. Starting with your English skills is a great idea! I\'ll help you with all my might. Keep on reviewing the feedback and doing your homework if you have time then my friend. I\'m thinking of sharing other materials that you may find useful. I will check them and give them to you, probably next week. And as for my answer to your question, honestly, I haven\'t fallen deeply for anyone. I must have fallen too much for myself. Let\'s call it a day Kirk! I\'ll catch you again tomorrow. _Klein MY dear...Honestly and honestly,,, I want to fall for someone.....But recently, there is no one that I want to fall for around me...T,TDo you have anyone that you want to fall for?>>CorrectIf you have, don\'t hesitate to effort for close with him.^^>>If you have, don\'t hesitate to extra effort to be close to him.And finally..I will try everything for better English speaker.!!>>And finally, I will try everything to be a better English speaker!cheer me up PLZ~~!! >>Correct!  

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