Hi there~

2011-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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How are you? yesterday, i met a friend who just came back korea from U.S.A. i really happy to meet her. we talked about lots of things. she talked me about america life. and she gave me a chocolate. it's giant hershey's. from time to time i eat that, but i really thanks to her. please call me ~ see you:)

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Share your chocolate. Kkk^^ I really like chocolate. I always eat chocolate and drink chocolate everyday. Stay as sweet as chocolate! It’s me, T. Joanna   How are you?>>Correct!yesterday, i met a friend who just came back korea from U.S.A.>>Yesterday, I met a a friend who just came back in the country from the USA.i really happy to meet her.>>I was really happy to meet her.we talked about lots of things.>>We talked about lots of things. (Observe proper capitalization)she talked me about america life.>>She told me about American life.and she gave me a chocolate. it's giant hershey's.>>She gave me A giant Hershey’s chocolate.from time to time i eat that, but i really thanks to her.>>From time to time, eat it. I really thank her for that.please call me ~ see you:) >>Please call me. See you!

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