Hi~there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I read your writing well.^^
Thank you for your opinions that you mentioned o feedback.
Of course, I agree that the language is culture based.
But in fact, I don't know all about cultures because I have not got much experiences.
Honestly, I want to get much more experiences about languages, so I want to go to the other countries.
If I will catch the chance above, I will try it without hesitation.
I need more experience, My dear.....
Anyway, have a good night and sleep well dear!^^
Bye!!
H.W
I think I am a go getter!! hhhhhh~~
So, I want to ear money much more....
Well..... maybe $100000000000!!!
I hope~~!!
So, I will go to this restaurant...hhh
It is just a jok ^,~
Good night~~
강사 첨삭
I am always thankful to you because I know that whatever I write is never wasted. You truly read everything carefully. THANK YOU SO MUCH KIRK!
As a reward, I\'ll be writing more for you to review and for you to get even more acquainted with cultures behind languages through vicarious experiences. But of course, if you can get the chance to travel to different countries, that would be so much better. Just make sure that I can tag along, please. No worries; I am not pushing you to invite me. But if you don\'t mind, why not!
When it comes to earning much more money, why don\'t you make different kinds of investments?
Some can be very risky but there sure are conservative ones, which will give you so much profit in the long run.
There\'s just something that I would like to clarify here. Is there a $100000000000 restaurant in Korea? It\'s because you have written below that you will go there. I know that you can answer this question later. I will call you then Kirk! Hang in there.
_Klein
I read your writing well.^^>>CorrectThank you for your opinions that you mentioned o feedback.>>Thank you for your opinions that you mentioned in your feedback.
>> Thank you for your opinions, which you included in your feedback.Of course, I agree that the language is culture based.>>Correct
OR >> Of course, I agree that language is culture-based.But in fact, I don\'t know all about cultures because I have not got much experiences.>>But, in fact, I don\'t know all about cultures because I have not got much experience.
>>But, in fact, I don\'t know all about cultures because I have not got many experiences.Honestly, I want to get much more experiences about languages, so I want to go to the other countries.>>Correct
OR >> Honestly, I want to get much more experiences about languages, so I want to go to other countries.If I will catch the chance above, I will try it without hesitation.>>CorrectI need more experience, My dear.....>>I need more experiences, my dear.
>>I need much experience my dear.Anyway, have a good night and sleep well dear!^^Bye!!>>CorrectH.WI think I am a go getter!! hhhhhh~~>>Correct [go-getter]So, I want to ear money much more....>>So, I want to earn much more money.Well..... maybe $100000000000!!!I hope~~!!So, I will go to this restaurant...hhh>>CorrectIt is just a jok ^,~>>Correct [spelling check: joke]Good night~~
>>Correct
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