Hi there^^
학생이 쓴 원문
About your question, I had a dream that I will be Opera singer.
But It is had gone up in smoke.
Of course, I would be become a great Opera singer, I don't want it because I want to earn much money.
So, I will become a rich man.^^
How about you?
강사 첨삭
Your dream of becoming an Opera singer must have gone up in smoke but I\'m glad that it did not stop you from dreaming more. Truly, as long as we are breathing, we should keep on dreaming and striving to turn our dreams to reality.
I hope and pray that your dream of becoming a rich man will come true. Make sure to put your heart to it Kirk!
As for me, I sure have had many plans that had gone up in smoke. Well, that\'s life! If I am going to enumerate all of them, it will take us a day or two.
I don\'t even want to recall them because I am focusing on my current dreams. I sure want to put them to life now!
We can do it!
Thank you so much for sharing a piece of your mind again.
One step at a time Kirk and you\'ll get there.
I\'ll catch you later!
_Klein
About your question, I had a dream that I will be Opera singer.>>About your question, I had a dream to become an Opera singer.
>>About your question, I had a dream of becoming an opera singer.But It is had gone up in smoke.>>But it had gone up in smoke.Of course, I would be become a great Opera singer, I don\'t want it because I want to earn much money.>>Of course, I want to become a great Opera singer not because I want to earn much money.
>>>>Of course, I want to become a great opera singer not because of money.So, I will become a rich man.^^How about you?
>>Correct
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