Hi there!

2011-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Venus~ Did you have a great day? I feel sleepy so I dozed while my classs. You told me earlier about your school. But I don't know whether you are a senior or a junior and have a boyfriend or not and I don't know your major and your family. I didn't ask you such question. If you don't mind, I would like to listen your story. My answer about tomorrow's topic I'm going to introduce near the library. That building was called san-sue library after our neighborhood's administrative district. That is very quiet so, it is good to take a rest in that place. And that have a good view. That might be in bloom flowers these days. I have often borrowed books at that place. I go to the library a few time, as I was busy due to my school life. But I will feel comfort if go to there again.

강사 첨삭

I will asnswer all your questions about my personal life on our next meeting. :)

Venus~

>>Venus,

Did you have a great day?

>> CORRECT.

I feel sleepy so I dozed while my classs.

>> I fell asleep while having classes because I was very sleepy.

>> I dozed off while having class because I was very sleepy.

You told me earlier about your school.

>> CORRECT.

But I don't know whether you are a senior or a junior and have a boyfriend or not and I don't know your major and your family.

>> But, I don't know whether you are a senior or a junior. I also don뭪 know if you have a boyfriend or not. Additionally, you didn뭪 mention what your major is and things about your family.

I didn't ask you such question.

>> I didn뭪 ask you those questions.

If you don't mind, I would like to listen your story.

>> If you don't mind, I would like to listen to your story.


My answer about tomorrow's topic

>> My answer about tomorrow's topic:

I'm going to introduce near the library.

>> I'm going to introduce the library near me.

That building was called san-sue library after our neighborhood's administrative district.

>> That building was called 밪an-Sue library

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