Hi there!
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I will asnswer all your questions about my personal life on our next meeting. :)
Venus~
>>Venus,
Did you have a great day?
>> CORRECT.
I feel sleepy so I dozed while my classs.
>> I fell asleep while having classes because I was very sleepy.
>> I dozed off while having class because I was very sleepy.
You told me earlier about your school.
>> CORRECT.
But I don't know whether you are a senior or a junior and have a boyfriend or not and I don't know your major and your family.
>> But, I don't know whether you are a senior or a junior. I also don뭪 know if you have a boyfriend or not. Additionally, you didn뭪 mention what your major is and things about your family.
I didn't ask you such question.
>> I didn뭪 ask you those questions.
If you don't mind, I would like to listen your story.
>> If you don't mind, I would like to listen to your story.
My answer about tomorrow's topic
>> My answer about tomorrow's topic:
I'm going to introduce near the library.
>> I'm going to introduce the library near me.
That building was called san-sue library after our neighborhood's administrative district.
>> That building was called 밪an-Sue library
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