HI there^^

2015-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Klein! Please, would you make this sentence easier for me? "May you brighten up more lives; not to mention more non-native English speakers to have faith in their English communication skills and the rest will definitely follow!" It is a little hard to understand with me. ㅠ.ㅠ And, It is so nice words to me that she told about me look like him.^^ Because, He looks like very handsome. Let me thank you.^^ And about your question.... If My boss require me to overwork that is no reason, I will finish the job!! Of course, It is just my imagine.^^;;;;

강사 첨삭

No problem Kirk. In other words, your English skills have become so good and are being developed because you are willing to study hard. This is why I want you to inspire other people who study English. You are a good role model! And I\'m glad that you took what Jasmine said positively. Martin is really very handsome, like you. But you know what at first I didn\'t know him well. LOL I only knew his face but not his name. Thanks to Jasmine, every thing is clear. LOL Have you done your job well today? May you continue to have a cool afternoon Kirk. Don\'t forget to take things easy. _Klein Klein!Please, would you make this sentence easier for me?>>Correct OR >> Would you please make this sentence easier for me? >>Would you please simplify this sentence for me?\"May you brighten up more lives; not to mention more non-native English speakers to have faith in their English communication skills and the rest will definitely follow!\">>CorrectIt is a little hard to understand with me. ㅠ.ㅠ>>It is a little hard to understand. >>It is a little hard to understand for me. >>For me, it is a bit hard to understand.And, It is so nice words to me that she told about me look like him.^^>>And those are so nice words to me where she said that I look like him.Because, He looks like very handsome.Let me thank you.^^And about your question....>>Correct!If My boss require me to overwork that is no reason, I will finish the job!!>>If my boss requires me to overwork for no reason, I will finish the job!Of course, It is just my imagine.^^;;;; >>Of course, it is just my imagination. >>Of course, it is just my imagination.

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